The Doctor's Drawings

[DoctorBeardly]

Greetings!

So for Valentine's Day I wanted to make a mock video game cover for my boyfriend, in which he fights through a zombie hoard on v-day, but I haven't drawn in a while so it going kinda...meh. This is my starting point, any suggestions? Should I start over? D:

Also, I'm not sure what title to go with: Ruthless Ryan, Raging Ryan, or Rageful Ryan? ALLITERATION, DUDES.

[Ashman]

im partially confused on his arm to the left (viewers left) his shoulder goes down into his arm at the shoulder just fine, but at the butt of the gun his elbow is way back, and theres that bit underneath his hand which im assuming is the strap for the gun hanging down, i know its a wip but it still makes little sense, just that bit, it may just be me but it looks a bit wierd, everything else is fine though

[DoctorBeardly]

Ashman: Yeah, this was my reference. Comparing the two I can definitely see where things got weird. Thanks a lot!

[bigjonny13]

Raging Ryan
But you gotta make him look more angry.
Maybe give him aviators and a stogy.

[maficmelody]

At 2/1/11 07:28 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Raging Ryan
But you gotta make him look more angry.
Maybe give him aviators and a stogy.

Raging Ryan agreed..

Could use a rose in a teeth-baring grin =D

[DoctorBeardly]

So I went back to the drawing board and ended up taking a completely different direction. I tried for something more cute and personal and all around more Valentine-y. I think I like it better, what do you guys think? D:

[Droghead]

Pretty cool style. A lot different from what I have seen on the art forum so far.

I don't know what to criticize about them, really. They look perfectly fine for me, as in it seems like you have mastered your own style. If you have reached that place, then it's all about bringing about the cool ideas.

[Spac3case916]

I dig the warped body proportions.

[DoctorBeardly]

Droghead: I'm really glad to hear you like the stylization, it's actually new and I was very unsure about it. Thank you.

Spac3head: Thanks! I especially like to draw my ladies currrvvyyyyy. :D