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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-07 22:58:27 Reply

At 9/7/11 10:45 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: Here is somthing i did today... what cha'yall think?

Its pretty neat, I like it. Though you should darken hills abit.


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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-08 07:43:31 Reply

At 2/4/11 10:45 PM, PinkRose11 wrote:
At 2/4/11 10:34 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 2/4/11 10:32 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: Shark again! Well I just got my tablet and still getting used to it, but here is my linework of Mr...? Critism wanted! :3
The teeth come to the edge of his mouth on his right, but they don't on his left.
AKA there's a gap with no teeth on his left side of his mouth.

I think what big was trying to explain is that the shark in the 'I say' meme's mouth is contructed differently to the flat shape that you're using for a mouth, so it looks more 3-D than your shark does at the moment. I think you can work with what you've got for now, as it's still funny.

Was wondering: do you ever draw from real life?

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-08 08:13:36 Reply

Was wondering: do you ever draw from real life?

I do somtimes! I'll scan and post some of the faces and real life sketches soon, however they are not amazing, but im getting better. Ive done some birds, i think ill post those first.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-08 09:24:29 Reply

At 9/8/11 08:13 AM, PinkRose11 wrote:
Was wondering: do you ever draw from real life?
I do somtimes! I'll scan and post some of the faces and real life sketches soon, however they are not amazing, but im getting better. Ive done some birds, i think ill post those first.

Would love to see some. I was asking because usually you find the more observational drawing you do the better your cartooning gets. It feeds it.

Keep it up!

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 19:12:43 Reply

I sketch im redoing in illustrator. Fionna! Whatchayall think? :P

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 19:22:33 Reply

At 9/25/11 07:12 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: I sketch im redoing in illustrator. Fionna! Whatchayall think? :P

I don't exactly know what she looks like in being that I haven't even seen the first whole season of adventure time but you made pretty curvy. The only issue I see with it is that the her legs are a little to short and her torso is pretty tall

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 19:25:48 Reply

Fionna Here is what she looks like on the show

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 19:34:53 Reply

At 9/25/11 07:25 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: Fionna Here is what she looks like on the show

seeing that now in comparision She actually looks pretty fine at the moment , I just think the stance she's in that is making her look a little flat and stiff maybe because the hips don't seem to be as wide.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 22:19:25 Reply

Here she is done. How do you get rid of that fuzziness when you save a vector? Whenever I save as jpeg it always does that! Help D: I wanna submit this to the portal but the areas are fuzzy >.<

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 23:07:49 Reply

At 9/25/11 10:19 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: Here she is done. How do you get rid of that fuzziness when you save a vector? Whenever I save as jpeg it always does that! Help D: I wanna submit this to the portal but the areas are fuzzy >.<

What program are you saving it in?


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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-09-25 23:17:52 Reply

At 9/25/11 11:07 PM, Aigis wrote:
At 9/25/11 10:19 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: Here she is done. How do you get rid of that fuzziness when you save a vector? Whenever I save as jpeg it always does that! Help D: I wanna submit this to the portal but the areas are fuzzy >.<
What program are you saving it in?

Illustrator/flash/photoshop. I solved the probelm though, I just needed to save into PNG instead of JPEG

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-11-07 20:20:31 Reply

heres a doodle i did in class a few weeks back. I may redo in illustrator!

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-11-07 20:31:05 Reply

And I would like a little anatomy help on this please. I know her head is too big and so are her legs, but im having trouble with the leg postion and arm substance :O

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-11-07 20:33:21 Reply

At 11/7/11 08:31 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: And I would like a little anatomy help on this please. I know her head is too big and so are her legs, but im having trouble with the leg postion and arm substance :O

ooopsss I do this to much. Here is the pic

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-04 17:10:53 Reply

Something I drew today. i feel like a cheater cuz I used a Tut (but it wasnt miku!) lol. What do you think?

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-06 17:27:47 Reply

just a doodle for a friend during school.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-06 18:24:32 Reply

just combo of dumb little things

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-06 18:24:45 Reply

At 11/7/11 08:33 PM, PinkRose11 wrote:
At 11/7/11 08:31 PM, PinkRose11 wrote: And I would like a little anatomy help on this please. I know her head is too big and so are her legs, but im having trouble with the leg postion and arm substance :O
ooopsss I do this to much. Here is the pic

for the style you're going for, you're not too far off to what it should be. notable problems are woth the arms (which are far too long and skinny) and the neck (again, too long). Everything will fit better and look really great if you fix that :)


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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-06 18:31:44 Reply

for the style you're going for, you're not too far off to what it should be. notable problems are woth the arms (which are far too long and skinny) and the neck (again, too long). Everything will fit better and look really great if you fix that :)

OK this looks better. Thanks! Now I gotta work on legs lol.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-06 18:35:00 Reply

At 12/6/11 06:31 PM, PinkRose11 wrote:
for the style you're going for, you're not too far off to what it should be. notable problems are woth the arms (which are far too long and skinny) and the neck (again, too long). Everything will fit better and look really great if you fix that :)
OK this looks better. Thanks! Now I gotta work on legs lol.

yeah, i would still put a little extra meat on the arms though, and i think the legs are fine. it kinda has a round cutesy style, minus the arms :D after that, just stop drawing on lined paper and you're set! haha.


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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-09 03:31:36 Reply

i hope you get better

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2011-12-09 05:40:31 Reply

His style is really like Adventure Time. Haha.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-01-19 19:32:57 Reply

At 12/9/11 05:40 AM, DrFox wrote: His style is really like Adventure Time. Haha.

*coughcough* her. XD

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Here is a dumb sketch I did last night, gunna color and stuff later.

I present sailor moon

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-02-01 21:04:29 Reply

DOS PLEATS >.< Taking forever. Lemme know what yall think.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-02-10 00:02:44 Reply

Linkey

Ok im done! Here is the link to it! Ill post what I doodled tommorow. Its too big (dang scanner) and I have to rescale it, but im too lazy to do that right now. Night!

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-02-10 00:17:01 Reply

hands are your weakest. You could spend a day or two out of the week to practice just hands.

keep at it dude!


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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-09-04 08:26:07 Reply

Hey guys~ Been awhile. Well, I now have SAI and I'm loving it. The linework is so much smoother than what it used to be. I redid the Fionna (If you look at the date, that was Sept of last year) So one years worth of improvment. Also, (You may NOT like ponies, but I have submitted some pony artwork aswell, if you would care to look at my profile)

Heres the link to the Fionna! http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/pinkrose11/fionna-2

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2012-09-04 08:50:25 Reply

At 9/4/12 08:26 AM, PinkRose11 wrote: Heres the link to the Fionna! http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/pinkrose11/fionna-2

Definitely showing signs of improvement.

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Response to Art improvment suggestions 2013-07-17 02:09:24 Reply

Whoo hoo! I redid an artwork, much more improvement on the way. OLD
That is the old picture I modeled the new to be.

A link to the NG post if you would like to review! New

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