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My frivolous drawings. Jan. 28th, 2011 @ 10:28 PM Reply

Hey this is my art thread, not much to say/ Tell me stuff I need to improve on.

Here's something old.

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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 28th, 2011 @ 10:29 PM Reply

I didn't mean to have that slash right there, I need to proofread more.

A creeper sketch I did in flash today, I like it.

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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 28th, 2011 @ 10:32 PM Reply

My friend wanted me to draw a picture of her, I'm not particularly proud of it. I wish I made it a little less "stiff".

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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 28th, 2011 @ 10:39 PM Reply

You may want to crop your images so all of that blank space isn't showing.
There is something about exploitation of the BBS and how you shouldn't have more empty space than the actual image. Or something.

They are pretty interesting though, want to see more :)
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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 28th, 2011 @ 10:47 PM Reply

At 1/28/11 10:29 PM, Kollskegg wrote: A creeper sketch I did in flash today, I like it.

The creeper looks kinda cool and I like the sketchy style. It's my favourite of your pics and it's also the only one that is shaded.

As for the diver, the completely black background does not look good, I know it's supposed to be deep under water but it' not working. Also what is wrong with his face? And it could use more details, even if you went for a stylized drawing or something.

If you want to learn more dynamic poses (like for the girl drawing) I can recommend posemaniacs.

I agree with Kashi, it's looking interesting in here.


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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 29th, 2011 @ 12:37 AM Reply

I like your creepy green fellow, I think you should improve upon him, possibly in a new photo or two. Backgrounds enhance a picture. I personally enjoy a smaller image (like yours), but that doesn't mean you can't add detail behind and around the centerpoint, maybe with some plantlife? I don't know, just my thoughts. I also enjoy the sketch-style that you drew him with, I'd say stick with that.

As for the diver, I'd change the background so it isn't completely dark, like the gent above me said. However I think it would look nice in that dark setting, maybe just with a slight mix of colors, deep blue fading into black maybe... possibly even some surreal color like purple, to go with the bright green of his suit.

Anyways there's my two cents, keep up the nifty drawing.


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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 29th, 2011 @ 01:18 AM Reply

liek that picture, theres somthing about it that...draws me in, maybe the green against the flat black background.
i like to draw by pencil my self, then scan it on to my computer, heres one example

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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 29th, 2011 @ 06:56 AM Reply

Really promising stuff. My main point of critique on all of them is that they need some cleaning up. Some of the lines arent really smooth; perhaps try zooming in to fix those things as well as draw some of the smaller stuff (fingers etc).
As I said though, very promising nice style. I dont agree on kakashi about the black on the first pic, its part of the pic and necessary for the composition.


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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 29th, 2011 @ 03:24 PM Reply

I love your drawings...They're quirky. It's nice to see something unusual.

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Response to My frivolous drawings. Jan. 29th, 2011 @ 06:46 PM Reply

I dig the black in the diver piece. I think it's necessary in that particular illustration.


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