frequency route(poem)

[WallofYawn]

Frequency route(copyrighted):

Is it a voice within,

like a plant with roots embedded,

stretching vital signals thin,

with no idea of where it's headed?

Within every living object,

driving frequencies apart,

something only few detect,

what escapes the fractured heart?

Is it something quite abstract,

made of false realities,

is it like a heart attack,

seizing, giving way to thee?

Like a tree with branches spread,

both near and far apart,

what becomes of human souls,

when man has lost his mortal heart?

[Nylsa]

Hm, I like the way this poem rhymes! Not sure what the beat would be like, but that isn't important here, now is it? :)

Good luck with your future works!

[WallofYawn]

At 1/23/11 09:26 PM, Nylsa wrote: Hm, I like the way this poem rhymes! Not sure what the beat would be like, but that isn't important here, now is it? :)

Good luck with your future works!

It's actually not meant to be a lyric, but thank you. Much appreciated. :)

[Probably]

I'm going to be really fucking honest here. This sucks shit and you shouldn't post this online because you'll look back in a few years and cringe at how stupid you were.

[WallofYawn]

At 1/28/11 02:08 AM, Probably wrote: I'm going to be really fucking honest here. This sucks shit and you shouldn't post this online because you'll look back in a few years and cringe at how stupid you were.

Troll much? Well for your information mr. troll, I wrote this 3 years ago and it still seems good to me. I've shared some of my stuff with professional poets, and regular people alike, and they like my stuff. So, either offer constructive criticism, or GTFO.

PS. there's nothing funny, or edgy, or gross about posting an image they show in sex Ed. Grow up.