this is my rap.. am i good at all?

[chewers13]

Stackin my paper stackin my gold goin so hard I never scared of these hoes.. Thinking you tough? Dang you raw come up in my hood ill prove you wrong.. May think im small, may think im dull.. If you wanna try, just give me a call.. If you don't fuck with me I wont fuck with yall, mess with me I disconnect ya jaw. I grew up on these streets makin these beats. Always getting jumped. Man that's over, every morning im hung over you don't want my life I just wanna take a knife get it in my heart straight aim like a dart. Writin these beats livin on the streets I end up here with you after all this shit you do. Ill show you how its done we can have lots of fun .. Man,, you straight dumb

[Johnkirk]

Not really that impressive lyrically. Thats only one facet of good rap song however. The way its presented also has a major impact on its quality. A good beat helps as well.

But lyrically, nothing too special. In your defense, most songs on the radio today have God awful lyrics.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l1u43KDiW D0&feature=related\
Just thought I would post this here to show an example of a great rap song. Note the flow of the lyrics here.