Fisticuffs(a rap lyric i wrote)

[WallofYawn]

A rap I came up with a few ago.(patented)

Keep it locked down, keep your tongue off the ground,
reverse that frown, and turn the sickness into a sound.

Copacetic now, like uh, oh my god, wow,
I feel like a king cause I own my own mound.

Better to have a million piles of dirt,
than be disillusioned by the two tons of hurt.

Revenge, is a desert that is best served cold,
I wish that I were always young and never grew old.

So I'm told, that these dreams I have are just mere illusions,
Tired of the lies, no privacy, from mass intrusion.

These bottom feeders drag you down to their level,
making you believe that you're a hardcore rebel.

Without a cause, no time for applause,
cause you're chompin' at the bit,
like a shark without a jaw,
like a baby child without a tit,
like a future Renaissance.

Fair, is a fallacy that doesn't exist,
truth is an annoyance that never ceases to persist,
kiss my fist.

[OfficialSaintDro]

damn bruh that was nice bruh i rap to
not ina freak or homo way but were u stay

[WallofYawn]

*bump* I'm surprised no one's posted here yet.

[TheLameSauce]

mmmmmm...yummy desert.

why not try to pass your shitty rap lyrics as poetry? it'll still suck but at least you might get some of the people in the writing forum to click your link.

[WallofYawn]

At 1/23/11 12:39 PM, TheLameSauce wrote: mmmmmm...yummy desert.

why not try to pass your shitty rap lyrics as poetry?

Are they shitty because they suck, or because you just don't like rap?

:it'll still suck but at least you might get some of the people in the writing forum to click your link.

I labeled it as a rap lyric, because that's what it is, a lyric. It's funny how you try and take the piss out of it, tho.

[TimeBender]

it's great. but i really have no idea what its on about. explaination please?

it's pretty interesting lyrically, surprised me. dope son.

[WallofYawn]

At 1/26/11 03:17 AM, TimeBender wrote: it's great. but i really have no idea what its on about. explaination please?

Just fooling around with wordplay. Whatever ideas i have in my head. It's somewhat relevant to my life experiences and people i've met, but mosty it's just a random freestyle, which i later wrote down, and edited.

it's pretty interesting lyrically, surprised me. dope son.

Thanks man, much appreciated.

[TimeBender]

At 1/26/11 03:43 AM, WallofYawn wrote:

At 1/26/11 03:17 AM, TimeBender wrote: it's great. but i really have no idea what its on about. explaination please?

Just fooling around with wordplay. Whatever ideas i have in my head. It's somewhat relevant to my life experiences and people i've met, but mosty it's just a random freestyle, which i later wrote down, and edited.

it's pretty interesting lyrically, surprised me. dope son.

Thanks man, much appreciated.

ah, cool man i was sending you a pm about it too. Thanks, I do that tpo although now im more working around stories with my raps. but theres a diamonds remix im doing, the whole point of the rap is actually just to write to do the fastest flow i can.

peace man

[rifledark1]

Once a generation, there is an Anti-Christ and a Christ.

It's up to Christ whether or not they forgive the Anti-Christ.

[WallofYawn]

At 1/26/11 04:10 AM, rifledark1 wrote: Once a generation, there is an Anti-Christ and a Christ.

It's up to Christ whether or not they forgive the Anti-Christ.

What is this madness?