Whaddaya think of my anim *so far*?

[JaggedEdges]

Hiya all, here's an anim i'm working on, if you could just give me some feedback, and suggest if anything looks odd or could be improved, drop a comment!

Charmanderp Anim
The actual charmanderp character (retarded *derp* version of charmander) is NOT mine, but rather from a website. I'm not taking credit for any of his work, and will (if i finish it) put his name down as an animator.

[M-Shack]

I wouldn't use that animation loop. It's very good quality and will bring down the work you actually do. Not much really happened yet so it's hard to give advice.

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/21/11 01:51 PM, M-Shack wrote: I wouldn't use that animation loop. It's very good quality and will bring down the work you actually do. Not much really happened yet so it's hard to give advice.

rightho!

[Kollskegg]

there is no animation other that what you stole.

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/21/11 09:40 PM, Kollskegg wrote: there is no animation other that what you stole.

Yeah thanks mate, i stole it even though i emailed the guy to ask his permission for it. He said yeah ok as long as i gave him credit. so fuck off.

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/21/11 10:21 PM, Mark-er wrote:

At 1/21/11 10:16 PM, JaggedEdges wrote:

At 1/21/11 09:40 PM, Kollskegg wrote: there is no animation other that what you stole.

Yeah thanks mate, i stole it even though i emailed the guy to ask his permission for it. He said yeah ok as long as i gave him credit. so fuck off.

Whoops I didn't read that. Well anyways, you should at least try to improve the art of the people.

Yeah alright. I was thinking of drawing my own version, or just putting bunchie in xD

[HizuPlague]

There's nothing really to. . .critique.

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/22/11 12:26 AM, HizuPlague wrote: There's nothing really to. . .critique.

IKR!

[CyanSandwich]

I think using the charmander loop would be a bad idea. People already said it brings down what you made in comparison. It also means you can't really learn and develop your skills, and some people will accuse you of stealing.

[Sacros]

ok dude, that loop was made by joshua palmer a.k.a. zeurel and was comissioned in deviant art to some other guy
i doubt you can use that, even if you can it will probably wont pass the filter of the flash portal cuz many ppl will vote 0 thinking you stole it

if you want recognicion you have to do it the hard way like everyone here, spending time on your stuff

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/22/11 02:22 AM, Sacros wrote: ok dude, that loop was made by joshua palmer a.k.a. zeurel and was comissioned in deviant art to some other guy
i doubt you can use that, even if you can it will probably wont pass the filter of the flash portal cuz many ppl will vote 0 thinking you stole it

if you want recognicion you have to do it the hard way like everyone here, spending time on your stuff

Yeah i hear all of you guys. I've changed the animation cycle to bunchie. xD

[Blounty]

It is still shit with the new character.

[JaggedEdges]

At 1/22/11 10:53 AM, Blounty wrote: It is still shit with the new character.

Wow thanks man! Why dont you go fuck off. I'm asking for some tips so i can improve my animations, because this is only my 2nd. Post something constructive or fuck off you useless cunt

[maficmelody]

Maybe add some depth to the characters' forms?

(Disregard the face example, it's a recycled img I showed somebody else with a similar question)

[Blounty]

My help would be learn to draw before starting to animate.

[Kollskegg]

At 1/22/11 03:45 PM, Blounty wrote: My help would be learn to draw before starting to animate.

this times a billion

[dfuzz1987]

you had to ask him for his animation because your animating sucks THAT bad?

[MickHarrison]

it's shit.... it is you that is a useless twat

[LotsOfEvil]

You obviously did not learn anything about how to draw, either in Flash or in general. Either make a real commitment to learn or give up.

[JaggedEdges]

Yeah, as i've said to everyone. This was my 2nd real animation. I AM learning, and am hoping to get better as my animations progress. Did any of the more famous animators on newgrounds make a 4+ movie on their first try?

[MickHarrison]

this is like holding up a brick and saying 'what do you think of my house'?
why don't you just do something with your time other than wasting other people's

if you cannot see how bad this is then you have something wrong with you... now fuck off