lockwork's Art chest

[lockwork]

Hi!, this is something i'm working on right now i would like some tips on where to go with it and tell me if you see any thing i need to change. i will add more art in the future.

[Decky]

At 1/20/11 10:08 PM, lockwork wrote: Hi!, this is something i'm working on right now i would like some tips on where to go with it and tell me if you see any thing i need to change.

I think that its looking good, If I were you though I'd add abit more detail especially on the arm and also some colour wouldn't hurt.

[bigjonny13]

Why is the thumbnail on the inside?

[Fifty-50]

Loving the clean, crisp lineart there mate. Sure would love to see it finished.

[maficmelody]

I think the ear is a little too far forward.. and I'm agreeing with what Jonny-13 pointed out.

Do you have an under-drawing? The body feels unnaturally contorted.

[lockwork]

hmm he is a half monster so yes he looks unatural, and his thumb is right where it needs to be your wrong 13. thanks his ear could move back a little.

[bigjonny13]

At 1/21/11 06:44 PM, lockwork wrote: hmm he is a half monster so yes he looks unatural, and his thumb is right where it needs to be your wrong 13. thanks his ear could move back a little.

No it's not, I'll prove it.
The thumbnail is on the outside, not the inside.
The only way that could be possible is if the character's thumb is completely broken and rotated in the socket.

[Ashman]

At 1/21/11 06:44 PM, lockwork wrote: and his thumb is right where it needs to be your wrong 13

but his thumbNAIL isnt, its wrong because the thumbnail is facing up, theres no way with palm flat and thumb out, that the nail can face up, also that first finger is too long

the perspectives a bit wierd too, his abs are facing towards us, but everything else is facing away, since its a wip i cant crit anymore but looks good so far

[Kinsei]

At 1/21/11 06:59 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/21/11 06:44 PM, lockwork wrote: The thumb isn't wrong, you are...

Bull shit its wrong and here is why.

Jonny's right, get that nail on the other side.
i can see ow it could be like that bu when I try to do the pose with my own hand it is very uncomfortable and if I push it as far as I can, I can't get it tat far up. as it was already said, it would probably have to be broken...

[Fifty-50]

Huh. I feel so dumb for not noticing that freaky nail. OP, just fix it and it's all done.

[Lintire]

Looking good - very defined and the anime is coming out well in it. Like the others said, a few issues, but nothing too major anyways. All the same, it's coming out well, and I'm liking the grace that its got in it - lovely lineart, anyways. I'll peep in again when it's finished.

[maficmelody]

It's late, got off work a few hours ago, really tired.. but someone tell me I'm wrong in what I see. Haven't done a nude sketch/study ( not sketching or studying in the nude ) in a while so I'm illustrating what I see the best I can.. and in flash =P

(follow-up of my earlier post)

[ExtremeFudgeMaster]

Nice. I like the clean lines.

[lockwork]

thanks for the tips but i scraped that last drawing here is a new one.

[lockwork]

and another.