Who wants to make a comic

[zerozekebetty]

I have already made a script and I need an artist and other people.
Here is the poilot comic.
Easy Company: A tale woe and awesome.
Sence sets in with Three Aerican soldiers play cards in the middle east.They are all in full combat armor. Currency their using is Porno Mags , cigarettes, and random items they've gotten. First soldier, Private "Laurie" Lawrence, is losing badly. One of the other soldiers Corpral Rickey "Red" is drinking beer, he is also losing. Last soldier Staff Sargent Lizze"the lesbo lizard" is winning by a landslide[NOTE: She is lesbian].
Lawrence: God damnit.......There goes the last of my cigarettes.
Red: Cheer up comrade, I'm srue you'll do better next time.
Liz: Ha, the day he can play cards is the day he can use a gun!
Lawrence: Hey fuck you! I have you know I'm plenty good with a shotgun!
Red: Laurie you hate even getting close to a combat zone. A shotgun is a close range wepon.
Lawrence: Hey I like using shotguns but I hate getting up close and personal with an enemy, its just akward.
Liz: Boom!, [shows all Aces] Cough up all the stuff boys, Mamas cleaing house.
Group:Starts laughing.
PM me if interested.

[paradigmvulpes]

just a little criticism...are you or have you ever been in the army, or do you know someone in the army? or is this all based off of jarhead and black hawk down?

[ZeeAk]

Who's going to be interested in the amateur work of someone who can't spell, can't basically adhere to grammar, and creates a terribly unrealistic, cliche and boring piece of work?
Quality animators and artists will be looking for quality writers; like begets like. Currently, you seem to be aiming for the lowest common denominator.
I actually started to rewrite this piece for you, but realised that it would be useless, as I'd be doing your work for you.