heres one of my drawings

[Andy-X]

tell me what do you think?

[nicolemarieSEE]

keep working at it. it is kind of boring and it looks like you used crayons

[Luwano]

At 1/12/11 07:23 PM, Andy-X wrote: tell me what do you think?

Ok... firstly, the anatomy is off. The arms are too short and the lower part of the torso looks a little long to me.

Secondly, there's no shading, you should add that to give the pic some depth.

Also, the way she holds the gun looks strange and the feet look like blocks.

Is she partially nude or is that the colour of the suit? It looks nude on the torso but not at the lower feet and on the breasts.

[TwistedXP]

Your not doing to bad, however if you practiced putting your characters in more extreme poses and worked a little more at your anatomy, your art would be amazing. Also, try making your color more intense, harsher darks and sharper lights. It would help bring out your shading allot.