At 1/15/11 12:46 PM, Chameneon wrote:
Guys this is what I got so far as start screen, its still in progress but what do you think about it:
Dude, you've gotta try harder.
You've got some pretty great artists participating in your collab, if the participants list is accurate, and here you are drawing BASICALLY the same terrible drawing over and over again.
You're making a collab with however many people in it, and when people load it up the first thing they're going to see is that terrible drawing. And people WILL judge it by its menu.
Just like in both of your other parts, you have this picture that 1. looks nothing like an actual wooden totem, 2. looks more like a plank of wood than a cylindrical pole 3. looks like you drew it in 5 minutes. I don't know how long you actually spent on it, but that's what it looks like.
Plus, you spelled Totem with an 'F'. What the hell?
You say that you're going to be doing all the backgrounds for the collab, but I shudder to think of what it's going to look like if this is the standard that you're going to draw them to.
Seriously, dude. Put some gosh darn diddly arned effort in. Take a look at a picture of a totem, or even, like, a wooden pole, and see where you're going wrong.