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Feedback on shirt design Jan. 2nd, 2011 @ 10:34 PM Reply

I have designed a shirt and it is up for scoring on threadless and I was wondering if I could get some critique/some voting on it. You can comment here on the forum or comment on the actual design at threadless here:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/316 656/3D_Sparklehorse

Thanks! :)


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 2nd, 2011 @ 11:26 PM Reply

It looks pretty cool, but I like the whole 3D look, it'll also look pretty col in red/blue lights.
Another thing I was wondering was how do you get the templates to work? I never got mine working, though you probably did this on photoshop and not flash.
Anyway nice job, 5 stars.


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 02:54 AM Reply

That gives me a headache... but it looks good


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 03:15 AM Reply

Nice concept, does it work? You might want to pull them a little closer together before you cause seizures.

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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:20 AM Reply

At 1/3/11 03:15 AM, esko-man wrote: Nice concept, does it work? You might want to pull them a little closer together before you cause seizures.

Yeah my one criticism would be that the colours are too far apart which is obscuring the linework. Don't get me wrong i know it's meant to be 3D and all but not everyone walks around with 3D glasses and it's going to need to sell on more than just "OMG IT'S 3DEES!"


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:25 AM Reply

I need 3d glasses. I'm sure it's cool.


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:34 AM Reply

At 1/3/11 08:25 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: I need 3d glasses. I'm sure it's cool.

I bet you keep all your festival bands on one wrist too hmmm? And wear hats indoors? hmmm?


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:36 AM Reply

At 1/3/11 08:34 AM, GrumpyTom wrote: I bet you keep all your festival bands on one wrist too hmmm? And wear hats indoors? hmmm?

What do you mean??? Hmmm???


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:38 AM Reply

At 1/3/11 08:36 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 1/3/11 08:34 AM, GrumpyTom wrote: I bet you keep all your festival bands on one wrist too hmmm? And wear hats indoors? hmmm?
What do you mean??? Hmmm???

I mean your one of those hip young youths HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM?


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 08:39 AM Reply

At 1/3/11 08:38 AM, GrumpyTom wrote:
At 1/3/11 08:36 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 1/3/11 08:34 AM, GrumpyTom wrote: I bet you keep all your festival bands on one wrist too hmmm? And wear hats indoors? hmmm?
What do you mean??? Hmmm???
I mean your one of those hip young youths HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM?

Oh yeah??? So what if I am HMMMMMM?????


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 3rd, 2011 @ 09:03 AM Reply

Hmm yea i agree with the general consensus, the spacing seems way far apart. Even if it needs to be that far for the 3d to work, i think it becomes an irritating shirt to look at. Like i cant even give you proper feedback on the image cause its so hard to make out whats what. From the looks of it, the arms look short tho


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 4th, 2011 @ 02:11 AM Reply

I actually have a pair of 3d glasses on my shelf so I tried this out and it didn't work. I think the general consensus is right, which is it needs to be closer together. Also because not everyone has 3d glasses right next to them so it's hard to make out.

It's a cool concept though, is it about the band Sparklehorse? I love that band!

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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 4th, 2011 @ 03:21 AM Reply

Great! I love it! But I think that if I will put on this t-shirt - my wife will kill me)))


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Response to Feedback on shirt design Jan. 11th, 2011 @ 03:05 AM Reply

I dug this up because I thought it might be a better template pic if you plan on trying this design again. Only catch is if it gets printed you're supposed to send the model one of the shirts. Shouldn't be hard with the $1,500 or whatever they give you for getting a design printed ;)