A couple poems of mine

[Arthur-Swordswinger]

Here are three of my favorite poems that I have created in the past. I'm looking for your opinions and critisisms more than anything else. Thanks :)

Slowly Drifting Through a Star Ocean...
September 24, 2009

High above the mountain tops
High above the sea
High above the Milky Way
Flying high, just you and me

Grab my hand
And hold on tight
With nothing but stars
We're alone in the universe tonight

All around us
A meteor shower
We could drift on forever
Carefree of the hour

Out here in the endless
There isn't a sound
Just my hand in yours
Lets turn around

Back into civilization
Passed the space debri
Joyous from the time with you
Ma petite cherri

High above the Milky Way
High above the sea
High above the mountain tops
Grounded until tomorrow, just you and me.

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Lost Garden
December 14, 2008

A silver tulip
In a garden of grey
Caught my eye
And my heart one day

Magnificent leaves
With a lucid reflection
Reflecting the light
In every direction

I'll sit in the dirt
Beside the efflorescence
Content to become one
With the beautiful essence

After tomorrow's dawn
And the spring morning dew
We will see if we have become one
Just me and just you.

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Seaward
March 16, 2009

Standing ashore
But mind floating high
Lost in the currents and reflections
Of the horizon's forgotten tears

Seaward the mind floats away
Dancing on the ripples
From the soft melodic voice of the wind
And maternally caressed by its will

Of all the times lost
Where stories are born and told
In the endless expanse of sea
Is where I'll spend my years

It's time to set sail
And aim for the far
I'm off on a journey
To the edges of the earth

Should I return
I'll be surprised myself
But how can one predict
A future not in sight?

A forward only journey
A trip back in time
Where a mast has become
My body and mind.

[Arthur-Swordswinger]

I found the "Informal Poetry Thread" and move this article over there.

If i find out how to delete this after posting, I will do that instead.