Need Critism on this animation

[nintendo768]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mv-XNjpRk OE

If your reply is anything along these lines, please kindly ram them up your arse:

1. generic gradients
2. they are circle people
3. anything flaming and not constructive

[Blounty]

1. generic gradients
2. they are circle people
3. anything flaming and not constructive

[nintendo768]

please ram that up your arse. thank you.

[Blounty]

And now after being a dick.

Sound quality needs improving.
Music choice also needs improving.
Would help if you practiced drawing and character development first.
Practice colouring and shading.
Find a style that you like and can animate well in.
Learn to lipsync (There are a few tutorials on newgrounds and youtube)
Make sure all voices used are of adequate ability and quality. (Also make sure they fit the characters)
Improve background drawing and perspective.
Improve writing and comedy timing.
Practice animating small things such as walk cycles, simple movements and random lip sycns.
Don't overlay loud music and voices at the same time.
Get rid off uneeded badly drawn intro.

Wall of text.

[Blounty]

the sound quality of what needs improving?

what coloring and shading things do I need to improve on?

I never found a good lip synch tutorial. I just say that lines and copy my mouth form.

Your mouth is not a gaping black hole, It has lips, teeth and a tongue which are all used to help make the different sounds.

When watching your flashes do you ever think that the sounds you use may be iritating to the viewer or do you just want to crank your flash out asap. If it is the latter spend more time on audio.

http://vimeo.com/16357456
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5zxz4WQN ew&feature=fvsr

Watch more of jazza's tutorials on youtube. He is a good flash animator.

[Luis]

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