At 12/15/10 06:22 PM, Major-n0ob wrote:
Try making it so it doesn't suck.
Try to not be such a major dick. Saying you hate something without any reasons why is completely pointless.
This doesn't suck. It's very flawed, but it's got some good aspects to it.
Things that could be done to improve it: The colors aren't all within the lines, so you may want to clean that up some. The lineart is a tad sketchy and could do for some cleaning up. The background completely blows; it's just a gradient, so this thing is sitting in midair. One of the eyes is still the color of the skin. The shading looks smeary in some places. How did you do the shading?