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Yo Dagaah! That's looking cool. I'll be doing a piece too, so save room for me! I'll have it up, sometime next week.

At 1/6/11 05:50 PM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote: Well done InsertFunnyUsername. That is really good.

Thanks. There's something that strikes me as strange about the colors, but eh, I'm not going to mess with it any more.

Also, I've decided that this is going to be the final draft, so don't wait on it. I may take a second look at it, but I may not so if I don't, use that one.

ok done, i think.

Not bad Dagaah. Maybe add in a Shooting Star in the background, maybe top left corner. That should spice it up a bit. Other than that, I think it isn't that bad.

At 1/7/11 08:45 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/7/11 05:51 AM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote: Not bad Dagaah. Maybe add in a Shooting Star in the background, maybe top left corner. That should spice it up a bit. Other than that, I think it isn't that bad.

One should take the log out of his own eye, before commenting about the speck in another's.

wow jonny, you have room to talk

I know my art is shit but that does not mean I can comment on others work

Beh, I tried

ARG I hated how the export went out. http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/b60b 0a5e8d55787a618e9a969f3f2a8e

At 1/7/11 05:51 AM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote: Not bad Dagaah. Maybe add in a Shooting Star in the background, maybe top left corner. That should spice it up a bit. Other than that, I think it isn't that bad.

it isn't that bad? if it wasnt for (maybe) the lack of a shooting star? haha ok thanks! care to explain what you don't like about it? it's not like a shooting star in the top left corner would make such a huge impact on it anyway. if you want me to make it better i need some better pointers than that buddy.

At 1/7/11 11:20 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/7/11 09:51 AM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote: I know my art is shit but that does not mean I can comment on others work

I'm just referring to the way your comment came across to me.
Maybe I misread it, but I'd felt a bit snide and contemptuous.

Haha okay, now I get you. Yeh I know, it was kind of lacking the comment I right, but it just seemed a bit empty in the back. Sorry if it was taken the wrong way, I didn't mean to sound bad.

@Dagaah: Let me re-review your art. That is really good. The character itself was created with good imagination, as for the background something just feels missing. I think it has somehting to do with the top left corner.

Anyway, other than that it is pretty darn good.

At 1/7/11 06:29 PM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote:

:as for the background something just feels missing. I think it has somehting to do with the top left corner.

arent buttons going in the top corners anyways?

My Second Submission. :).

I gave it a shot

Still going? yes? no? Possibly?
Either way here's a WIP if it is...

@Zanroth: That is really, really good. Although I can not really make out who/what is the main object, the background is well done.

@Recon: It is alright, maybe add in more thought to a background or something. The character is not bad but probably add in some extra detailing to make him look my attractive (not sexually). Add in more detail to the soil, maybe more layers of colour.

Anyway, as more advice is given the better it will look, and you will have a better chance of your art being accepted. Hope you go far in this collab.

Also, I am not the collab leader. Decky is the leader, he is just having difficulty with his internet, so he said ;).

At 1/10/11 05:46 AM, SteakandKidneyPie wrote: @Recon: It is alright, maybe add in more thought to a background or something. The character is not bad but probably add in some extra detailing to make him look my attractive (not sexually). Add in more detail to the soil, maybe more layers of colour.

I'm hoping you noticed those three little letters in my post that read "WIP" :)

At 1/10/11 07:14 AM, R3CON-A55A551N wrote:
I'm hoping you noticed those three little letters in my post that read "WIP" :)

Why would you bother posting a wip, If you're not ready for some crit to guide your progress? :s
Kinda beats the point now, doesn't it? :p

On topic:
You're right, the alien looks too much like an "accessory" to the scene here.
Perhaps I should cut it out of my scene and do another with only the alien.

Or just add extra detailing to the main character, but yes, re-creating the character would be best.

here's mine, just need to add legs and other such stuff, also need to add name but shall do that on upon finishing :3

At 1/10/11 07:08 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 1/10/11 12:41 PM, Zanroth wrote: Why would you bother posting a wip, If you're not ready for some crit to guide your progress? :s
Kinda beats the point now, doesn't it? :p

I think he pointed out the WIP part to state that he knows it has more to be done.

Exactly my point. I did want critique on it but the main thing he pointed out was the background, which obviously hasn't even been started. It's all good though steak my feelings ain't hurt I'm taking your critique just like i would anyone else's and working on it somemore. :)

What do you expect from crit, its not obvious it isnt started, you may have the intentions to keep it that way, who knows, it doesnt matter if you put finished or WIP you will get the same kind of crit about everything you have drawn, obviously.

Okay people, no more raving on with this shit, you are all like a bunch of girls in a drama class.

Just post stuff about aliens or what happened in your day but just no more whinging....Please.

Sorry bout causin that. Wasn't trying to derail the thread. lol Back onto topic.

Lol WIP. Moar drama please. lol

I'm moving at the pace of a snail.