the catwalk isn't properly centered.
Assuming the planks on the floor are of equal width, there are four of them on the left side of the cat walk and seven on the right side.
It's the only thing that really caught my eye on first glance.
Looks good though!
I like the couches :O
If they can even be called couches.
At 6/20/11 01:56 PM, Kumakun4 wrote: the catwalk isn't properly centered.
Assuming the planks on the floor are of equal width, there are four of them on the left side of the cat walk and seven on the right side.
It's the only thing that really caught my eye on first glance.
Looks good though!
I like the couches :O
If they can even be called couches.
I imagine those would be pretty uncomfortable... my main problem with the thing (apart from the brand) is the shape of the crates.... beercrates arent so elongated, which kinda changes the base of the idea....
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At 6/20/11 01:56 PM, Kumakun4 wrote:the catwalk isn't properly centered.
Assuming the planks on the floor are of equal width, there are four of them on the left side of the cat walk and seven on the right side.
It's the only thing that really caught my eye on first glance.
Looks good though!
I like the couches :O
If they can even be called couches.
At 6/20/11 02:53 PM, J-qb wrote: I imagine those would be pretty uncomfortable... my main problem with the thing (apart from the brand) is the shape of the crates.... beercrates arent so elongated, which kinda changes the base of the idea....
both of you are right, the catwalk is poorly placed, and the beer crates should be smaller.
But i already turned it in so i cant add any adjustments at this stage.
thx for the crit btw
I doubt you have to worry about the crates too much, cause it will most likely work if you replace two of your long looking one with three real ones. Your drawing still brings the overall idea across.
WIP referencing from "fallen angel" by Alexandre_Cabanel
trying to give him a new color scheme and will probably add some tattoo's.
At 6/23/11 11:16 AM, Flowers10 wrote: WIP referencing from "fallen angel" by Alexandre_Cabanel
trying to give him a new color scheme and will probably add some tattoo's.
update 3 hours in
At 6/23/11 04:16 PM, Flowers10 wrote:At 6/23/11 11:16 AM, Flowers10 wrote: WIP referencing from "fallen angel" by Alexandre_Cabanelupdate 3 hours in
trying to give him a new color scheme and will probably add some tattoo's.
I really like how this one is coming along! The abdominal are is nicely detailed. Can't wait for the finished piece!
At 6/23/11 04:23 PM, MegaMelmo wrote: I really like how this one is coming along! The abdominal are is nicely detailed. Can't wait for the finished piece!
thx here another wip
Still working on it, not sure how much i need to refine the bg. Lets just see how it goes :D
That latest picture is actually looking really good so far; so the best of luck with it. Does look like your original vision has changed a hell of a lot, to boot.
At 6/22/11 07:35 PM, Flowers10 wrote: I got allot of hours in this one, best full viewed!
This is fantastic. I like the shine and contrast on the robot as well as the soft texture of the woman's hair. The way that the woman's hair is similarly textured to the patch of background behind is nice, too. That being said, I think that the background is lacking in general. It feels like it should be refined more so that it implies objects. I wouldn't loose the blur, but I think that that blur should be implying some sort of setting.
At 6/26/11 10:18 AM, Flowers10 wrote: Still working on it, not sure how much i need to refine the bg. Lets just see how it goes :D
Nice again. You've put some great detail and color into the shading on the man's body. It's not a necessity, but perhaps you could consider making the shadows on the lower part of his body cooler and keeping the ones on the top of his body warn. I say this because the colors in the area he's sitting in are considerably cooler the sky. Just a thought.
:At 6/26/11 02:33 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
This is fantastic. I like the shine and contrast on the robot as well as the soft texture of the woman's hair. The way that the woman's hair is similarly textured to the patch of background behind is nice, too. That being said, I think that the background is lacking in general. It feels like it should be refined more so that it implies objects. I wouldn't loose the blur, but I think that that blur should be implying some sort of setting.
thanks, i wanted to look like the hair of the woman could be as long as the painting itself.
its nice that you noticed this.
Nice again. You've put some great detail and color into the shading on the man's body. It's not a necessity, but perhaps you could consider making the shadows on the lower part of his body cooler and keeping the ones on the top of his body warn. I say this because the colors in the area he's sitting in are considerably cooler the sky. Just a thought.
i will take your critique in consideration, thanks :D
Here's a rough sketch for some halo fan art im working on.
At 6/29/11 08:06 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Here's a rough sketch for some halo fan art im working on.
Can't wait to see how that turns out.
At 6/29/11 11:06 PM, MajesticBob wrote:At 6/29/11 08:06 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Here's a rough sketch for some halo fan art im working on.Can't wait to see how that turns out.
great, here's another one !:D
At 7/1/11 05:40 PM, Flowers10 wrote:At 6/29/11 11:06 PM, MajesticBob wrote:great, here's another one !:DAt 6/29/11 08:06 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Here's a rough sketch for some halo fan art im working on.Can't wait to see how that turns out.
did some adjustments, looks way better now
Last but not least, Tom on a penicorn!
i wont be very active in the upcoming 3 weeks, i will be traveling trough the wild west.
But i will bring my sketchbook with me, so hopefully i will have some drawings done when i come back.
Nice paintings, thanks for sharing such nice pictures with us. Hope to see more new pictures from you.
I really like the pictures which you have drawn. Really you make them, by seeing them i can say that you are an artist. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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At 8/5/11 06:25 AM, J-qb wrote: Artist badges all around!
ty ty ty!
okey so im back!
was nice'n long vacation, but no drawings.
seems like i have got some catching up to do.
Here's my wip for the chow.
i also want to do a madness piece but that will have to wait.
At 8/14/11 03:17 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Here's my wip for the chow.
i also want to do a madness piece but that will have to wait.
looking good but you might want to check the rules... I think you are not allowed to have secondary characters like that...
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I have issues with your tiny arms! The picture itself is pretty okay, but the arms seem too small for their rather buff/large bodies. Especially the hands.
At 8/14/11 05:07 PM, J-qb wrote:At 8/14/11 03:17 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Here's my wip for the chow.looking good but you might want to check the rules... I think you are not allowed to have secondary characters like that...
i also want to do a madness piece but that will have to wait.
she's naked!
At 8/14/11 06:22 PM, LittleAshy wrote: I have issues with your tiny arms! The picture itself is pretty okay, but the arms seem too small for their rather buff/large bodies. Especially the hands.
the arms of the king are defently in proportion. the arms of the queen are a bit short yes, but she doesnt has any hands yet.
At 8/15/11 03:02 AM, sammartin wrote: i really appreciate you efforts in your work, but you need more practice on it.
who doesnt?
Here's my sketch for madness..
You didn't post the update from what you did while on stickam =/
I think the king shouldn't be breaking any rules for CHOW
Who is the hunter?
At 8/16/11 02:33 AM, Knocturne wrote: You didn't post the update from what you did while on stickam =/
I think the king shouldn't be breaking any rules for CHOW
oh sorry, here is et!
This is a study of a master piece by Peter Paul Rubbens.
By copying it i learn things about the style Rubbens applied in his paintings.
