Need a poem!

[BabyGamer]

So I was challenged by my literary studies teacher to interpret a poem and adapt it into a piece of creative writing, adding my own spin on it. I thought, hey, the good guys at Newgrounds have some crazy ill imaginations, so why not get a poem from them?! :D so if anyone would like to be a doll and help me out by writing here one of their original poems, preferably with a lot of elements within it that would be easy to apply in the form of a narrative whilst being easy to describe, just give me something to work with :) once I finish my short story, I'll post it here so you can compare the narrative to the original poem :3 thank you if you decide to help!!

[Arthur-Swordswinger]

At 12/2/10 02:45 PM, BabyGamer wrote: So I was challenged by my literary studies teacher to interpret a poem and adapt it into a piece of creative writing, adding my own spin on it. I thought, hey, the good guys at Newgrounds have some crazy ill imaginations, so why not get a poem from them?! :D so if anyone would like to be a doll and help me out by writing here one of their original poems, preferably with a lot of elements within it that would be easy to apply in the form of a narrative whilst being easy to describe, just give me something to work with :) once I finish my short story, I'll post it here so you can compare the narrative to the original poem :3 thank you if you decide to help!!

This is my Booksie Page: http://www.booksie.com/wolfcry

None of the Short Stories are completed but it doesn't sound like that's what you wanted anyways. I would like to draw special attention to these ones.

-Weekend Wars
-Lost to the SeasAlive
-Lost Garden
-To Be Continued...
-Lost Garden
-Seaward

The list may be long but it's what I think are my most emotionally-packed poems. Feel free to let me know what you think

[BabyGamer]

This is my Booksie Page: http://www.booksie.com/wolfcry

None of the Short Stories are completed but it doesn't sound like that's what you wanted anyways. I would like to draw special attention to these ones.

-Weekend Wars
-Lost to the SeasAlive
-Lost Garden
-To Be Continued...
-Lost Garden
-Seaward

The list may be long but it's what I think are my most emotionally-packed poems. Feel free to let me know what you think

Wow. All of them were amazing. Your poems are extremely abstract, I love them. I couldn't help but stray from the guidelines of the list you gave me and ended up reading all of your creative wriiting pices. Out of the list, however, Seaward was my favourite. The imagery in it was very vivid, and I think I could adapt it into a short story rather elegantly. Right now there's an 80% chance I will use it. Thank you buddy :)

[Arthur-Swordswinger]

Thanks a ton man. I know there's a couple errors in some of them (I'm a terrible proofreader!).

Anyways, mind letting me check out the final product if you do end up using it?

[BabyGamer]

At 12/3/10 10:06 PM, Arthur-Swordswinger wrote: Thanks a ton man. I know there's a couple errors in some of them (I'm a terrible proofreader!).

Anyways, mind letting me check out the final product if you do end up using it?

Nah it's near immaculate, a few mistakes here and there but the rare grammatical error doesn't affect a brilliant poem. :D

And yeah definitely, if I do use it, I'll inbox you the finished piece, and if you like it, I'll post it here on the forum.

[Arthur-Swordswinger]

Either works for me. I'm excited to see what you'll do with it.

And thanks for the praise :P Dispite having it online I don't really advertise it so it's nice to get a little recognition here and there :P