quick poem that can be a rap

[Atlas]

I was bored when I scored my vocal chords all over the door and then my back was sore and I fed the poor to keep me from hearing another folklore but then i blew up the core and then you shot and you scored all up in guns bore and you said I need more

[LarxII]

uh. I think that's more of a clusterfuck of rhyming words rather than poetry or rap (Rhythm and Poetry) gotta convey some kind of emotion or idea.

[Platypus]

You should get into to the habit of typing each little line, on it's own individual line.

Otherwise it's hard to read it right..

[Brandonhazswag]

That was one big mash of rhymes and random shit, and I must admit, that was pretty funny. I disagree with Larxll. Songs do not have to convey emotions. I mean listen to the song Low Rider, a song that got massive radio airplay and popularity, and yet it's almost like an acid trip!

[homsarrunner3]

what is this I don't even

[LarxII]

Ok maybe not "music" but, good music. Poetry certainly should and honestly I hate modern rap because of the fact that most don't convey emotion. So if you want to be a rapper go for it and I'm not the critic to listen to.

[DjBirdMav]

You don't have to rhyme in every line, just expand on these lines and make them longer with details that support the original rhyme and you got yourself a rap.