Ezbake8's Sketches!

[TheRedRocks]

I just thought for one i submit some of my own sketches.

Here's on that I took with my computer camera. Crappy quality. Sorry i don't have access to a scanner right now.

[TheRedRocks]

Here's another picture one of the same just closer up. (doesn't look as good.)

[TheRedRocks]

Forgot the Pic sorry.

[TheRedRocks]

I would really enjoy some tips on my sketches but what ever. Here another one of a rock a found on the ground.

[TheRedRocks]

Here's another one. Not really sure what I was going for though.

[Luwano]

The sketches are very basic so there isn't much to critique yet. But the proportions of the body are off. Do you look at references when you are sketching? You really should do that. It takes much skill to draw the correct anatomy without any reference. I can highly recommend posemaniacs to get a feeling for drawing human bodies.

I can't really make out the rock. Rocks are hard to draw very detailed, because every rock looks different and some look really weird in reality. In this case it looks very flat, more like a leaf or some cloth. You should add shading to give it depth.

Dunno what's going on in the last pic. The girl is sitting there and the headphones are plugged to.... erm.... what? And why are there waves shooting out of it?

And sorry but the cam quality is pretty low. I almost can't make out some of the lines. Everything looks kinda blurry. Are you photographing them in a unlit room or with your mobile phone cam? In case you do, turn on the light please, it could improve the quality.

I read that you just started sketching, so keep it up and you will improve in no time.

If you are looking for tutorials and stuff, then take a look at this.

[TheRedRocks]

Thank you I enjoy your criticism. The cam quality is from my computer and the room I was originally in was not lit very well. I do have some sketches that are better in anatomy and I will post those. For now..

[Luwano]

At 11/14/10 08:46 PM, EZBAKE8 wrote: The cam quality is from my computer

Oh, stupid me. I missed that you already said that in your first post. :P

This last piece is your best to me. And the photo quality is much better too.

[TheRedRocks]

At 11/14/10 08:51 PM, Luwano wrote:

At 11/14/10 08:46 PM, EZBAKE8 wrote: The cam quality is from my computer

Oh, stupid me. I missed that you already said that in your first post. :P

This last piece is your best to me. And the photo quality is much better too.

I agree with that my last is better. Here's another...
I don't like the left breast it looks square.

[Lintire]

Yeah, the breasts and torsos are really way off. Did you draw this from observation (say, just a model on the internets?) or from imagination, because it looks a little bit like the latter.

[TheRedRocks]

Here's a sketch of a tower of and odd dream i had last night!

[TheRedRocks]

At 11/14/10 09:20 PM, Lintire wrote: Yeah, the breasts and torsos are really way off. Did you draw this from observation (say, just a model on the internets?) or from imagination, because it looks a little bit like the latter.

The latter, it was late at night and was to lazy to look up a model. But hey i'm just starting out!