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mangaka350
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critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 05:05 AM Reply

so guys what do ya think?
ya im a noob here on newgrounds :3

critics please :3

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 05:30 AM Reply

That is extremely good. Very detailed and pretty great hatching you got there although it could be emphasised. You should do more stuff like this.

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 05:43 AM Reply

Must have taken a while to do that chainmail, i demand moar! i like it.

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 05:48 AM Reply

thanks ill post MOAR >:3

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 05:56 AM Reply

Hey! Your that guy on deviantart! Welcome to the forums! I say your very awesome. :D


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 06:01 AM Reply

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I LOL'D small world ey?

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 06:04 AM Reply

At 11/8/10 06:01 AM, mangaka350 wrote: ^
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I LOL'D small world ey?

Yeah lol. So have you come to your senses and realized that newgrounds is better than deviantart? Post four pieces to the portal so I can scout you already! :P


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 08:13 AM Reply

I think that with crosshatchins this good you don't need such heavy linework. Perhaps abandon the lines all to gether and try to create something similar..


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 8th, 2010 @ 08:20 AM Reply

heres another one....well im gonna re-visioned this one soon

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 9th, 2010 @ 01:39 AM Reply

At 11/8/10 06:04 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
At 11/8/10 06:01 AM, mangaka350 wrote: ^
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I LOL'D small world ey?
Yeah lol. So have you come to your senses and realized that newgrounds is better than deviantart? Post four pieces to the portal so I can scout you already! :P

one left >:3
so you can me

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 9th, 2010 @ 03:06 AM Reply

i mean " so you can scout me "
if only there was an edit button so i could fix my fail grammar D:

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 9th, 2010 @ 10:30 AM Reply

wow great job!
like the last one!


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 9th, 2010 @ 12:11 PM Reply

Near the collar is to blank you could add something to fill it out but art = opinion

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2010 @ 02:01 PM Reply

some drawing vids i made >:3

drawing video no.1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xAbI1UJz d0

drawing video no.2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iPgVCV18g Y0&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL

please enjoy XD

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2010 @ 02:52 PM Reply

exelent hatchin/cross hatching skill. what you use to make it?

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2010 @ 04:04 PM Reply

Wonderful character design continues to show us your works.


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2010 @ 04:30 PM Reply

I wouldn't have the patience for such detail. D:

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 16th, 2010 @ 07:03 AM Reply

panty from " Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt "

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 04:38 AM Reply

this is me again with a drawing video XD
and the character i draw is stocking from Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt

please click link

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QGpkDGl1A wo

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 05:02 AM Reply

Did you check the box with the "no this isn't a sketch put it in the Art Portal". You need to check the four pieces so you can get scouted. I can't scout you. Edit it first.


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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 06:59 AM Reply

oh i see im such a noob sorry XD

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 18th, 2010 @ 07:07 AM Reply

At 11/18/10 05:02 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Did you check the box with the "no this isn't a sketch put it in the Art Portal". You need to check the four pieces so you can get scouted. I can't scout you. Edit it first.

all of them is now check XD
sorry for my noobish act...

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Response to critics please :3 Feb. 9th, 2011 @ 01:10 AM Reply

god its been a while that i have not post D:
so heres some new art work of mine
its also in the art portal.

critics please :3

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Response to critics please :3 Feb. 9th, 2011 @ 01:58 AM Reply

Holy crap, that cross hatching is sexy as hell, I really like it; however, try to get a better grasp at facial structure, some points of view seem to be kind of messy.

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Response to critics please :3 Feb. 9th, 2011 @ 02:03 AM Reply

At 2/9/11 01:58 AM, Zyphonee wrote: however, try to get a better grasp at facial structure, some points of view seem to be kind of messy.

sure im working on that one

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Response to critics please :3 Feb. 9th, 2011 @ 05:05 AM Reply

dude i love the detail in the chain mail and crosshatching.


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Response to critics please :3 Feb. 9th, 2011 @ 07:22 AM Reply

At 2/9/11 05:05 AM, Spac3case916 wrote: dude i love the detail in the chain mail and crosshatching.

thanks man :3

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2011 @ 10:13 PM Reply

So Back from the dead? yep... Since i was gone, i went to a journey
far far away into the horizon to polished my skillz of EPICNESS!!!
AND THAT MY FELLOW ARTISTS!!! i succeed >:3

Homura Akemi
From Puella Magi Madoka Magica

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 15th, 2011 @ 10:17 PM Reply

Yuno Gasai
From Mirai Nikki / Future Diary

So... Critique please???

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Response to critics please :3 Nov. 16th, 2011 @ 03:52 AM Reply

its like a fine line version of 50/50... my mind can not take this fact into account... GAH!


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