Double Jump Videogame Comics

[TotoMimo]

Hey guys, I reformed this topic after inadvertently breaking the TOS.

This is my webcomic, a sketchy videogame based gag-a-day called "Double Jump".
I basically sketch these up in under an hour and scan and upload from my sketchpad, and do requests at random.

I've taken a tiiiiiny snippety part of my Gears of War strip and plonked it here to show you what kind of style it is I work in, and if you're interested perhaps click on the link!

I hope you all enjoy it:

http://doublejump.thecomicseries.com/

[Spac3case916]

The style looks good dude.

[Daverom]

I was expecting to say stuff about avoiding gamer comics unless what you have is really something
I don't have to say that, this really is good stuff.

The site layout on the other hand is a bit wonky. The comics are so huge that the page stretch is a little ridiculous, and sometimes it only takes up a third the screen. If there was a way for you to center the comics, and make the long horizontal comics vertical, it'd really help.

[Lintire]

Style is great and it's obvious that you at least like video games, and the love shows. However, yeah, make sure that the final layout is done better, like M-Vero pointed out, and make try your hand at inking or some other way of defining your comics, because the pencil art lacks depth. not a lot of depth, but still, ti lacks, and that shows through in final quality. However, not too bad, and I'd read it, so nice work so far.

[TotoMimo]

Thank you for the criticism and suggestions everyone!

I think the problem was that I was literally going "bish-bosh, done!" by thinking up, sketching, scanning and uploading super-quick. I'll try to find a point of consistency!