Her Rain Storm

[TheThing]

Something I just wrote and spent about 5 minutes editing. For those offering editing help, the first letter of each line spells the girl's name, so that can't be changed. Otherwise, enjoy, and don't be afraid to tell me what I should change or fix.

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Just like a rain storm, she's
Advancing across the sky,
Circling above my head,
Quietly waiting for my reaction.

Underneath the cover,
Everything is safe and depressing, much
Like being a fish in muddy water.

I need the water, but I do
Not want to risk
Electrocution in order to drink.