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Oddly shaped big toes 2010-09-24 02:13:22 Reply

Well, hello and welcome to my first literature thread on newground! In the following day, week or months, I will use this thread to "publish" my work. My first story is about a family, I wrote it as a test on how much taboo subject I could fit in a average family. Personnaly, I don't really like the result, since I know I could have done much better and far longer. At first, I wanted to post it on /x/ since its a bit like a creepy-pasta, but finally decided that you, newground, would be the first to read it, hope you will like it.

The Fallen Family :
This is the story of a family, the worst family that could exist, as much that reading the following line will only bring joy to your soul as they suffer of their puny mortal life. It will be my pleasure tonight to relate their life to you, for your own entertainment. So let's start, let's start the show of the Fallen Family...

The father was Gregory Fallen, a brute man with more muscle than brain. Always thought the world was is box full o' toy and the people in it, puppets made for is fun. He lived like a king 'till the age of 25, as he met a twist of fate, or should I say a twist of flesh. Caught in a stupid accident, consisting of a drunk standing in the middle of the way and some barrel roll, that ripped apart is left hand, he made a promise to himself that he would destroy the life of many of his "puppets" as possible. It began by the rape of his sister, Eleanor, who gave birth to a monstrosity. Then the murder of a childhood friend, William MacArthur, over a dispute about loaned money. After, he married an wonderful women, only to crush her heart as he beaten her for years. He had 3 kids with her. One of them died at childbirth, the others two were twins. Their name were Michael and Natalia Fallen.

The mother was Elisabeth Fallen, an dishonest whore who only cared about money. She lived in a rich family, in a great house that would make the envy of anyone, where every of her command were executed. At the age of 16 she was the high school slut and she was proud of it. She would fuck anyone, anytime, without reason and with no shame, as they followed her all day for her service. She didn't kept that way of life for long, as she experienced at the age of 23 her first rape by the hands of a street gang. Traumatized by this incident, she believed she could get redemption trough religion and without a second thought, her quest for salvation began. Over the years, she became grumpy and jealous of the younger people she met, but she hid this fact behind a wall of hate toward everyone. Suddenly she met an gorgeous man by the name of Gregory, as he looked quite handsome and sincere. They married without hesitation and this was her downfall, as she got beaten for years by him. The only way she could comfort herself was to deflect her hate toward her children.

The son is Michael Fallen, quite a prodigy but that got cast down by his very poor self-respect and cowardice. His whole life was filled with hate, at first from his parents, after from his high school companion and lately his own girlfriend. He couldn't stop crying as he seen the disgusting spectacle presented by his parent, which always ended by the fall of the wife. Later in his life he was the victim of everyone bullying in high school, even from the professor who looked at him like he was a ungrateful host in their beautiful scholar system. Then he met what he believed to be an angel from heaven, a woman by the name of Sally. She was the first person to give affection to him in his whole life, and he was grateful for that. Thus began their relationship, filled with false hope and happiness, which was destined to end drastically. One day, at the age of 32, as he was coming back from work, he didn't found his wife at home, ready to welcome him. Instead, he heard moaning from the second floor, you know, those kind of moan we heard as we fuck. With the fear of facing the inevitable, Michael climbed the stair to his bedroom to see a rather grotesque spectacle. His girlfriend, face down in the pool of filth that was another man genitals, while another man was taking the back door. Oh such tragic revelation for the poor man, as he seen his dream crushed by the unfair fate. All he did was running away, hoping that the incoming truck would hit him, ending is miserable life.

The daughter was Natalia Fallen, a shy girl with a rather strange and disturbing gift. She was allowed to talk to the dead and ask them their knowledge. Everyone thought she was crazy, you know, as she spoke alone, rambling about incoherent stuff. It didn't took long for her wonderful family and the doctor to send her to the asylum, hoping for her to be "cured". After years of treatment, thing never changed, she was as much disturbed. So they kept her at the center for who know how long, as they considered her too dangerous to live in the society. This is then that she called for me for the first time. I can still remember very well, as it was yesterday and it sounded a bit like that:

"Please! Please! I know you are here! Answer my plea! I wish for my family to suffer, as they sent me to this hell!"

Oh, the look she had in her face as I crept out of the shadow, such joy were in these beautiful eye. I accepted to complete her request, but at the only condition that she live up with the consequence of such act. Blinded by an understandable rage, she accepted, so slowly I returned to the shadow from where I once came.

The day after, she had some joyful news as the doctor told her that her father, mother and brother all died in the same night. The parents died as the father shot his wife and killed himself afterward, and the son got hit by a truck. She was very happy, but as she heard that her brother was no more, she felt her world crumble around her. It didn't took her long to call me back, and it didn't took me long for me to come.

"Why have you done that? I wanted my family to die, but my brother was innocent! He was only a victim like me, and now I am alone. Curse you!" Said the poor girl in tear.

"You decided to live with the consequence" I said with my tedious voice."Blinded by your humans emotion, you accepted such a foolish agreement. So let me reveal to you what your hate caused..."

As I said those word, I opened her mind, to show her the disgusting truth, the malicious plan I had planned all along. It began with her father, as I told her I was the one who caused the accident by blocking the road all those year ago. After, I told her I was the one who raped her mother, with the help of some thugs. Following this revelation, I told her I was the doctor who approved her insanity status and thus all her suffering at the asylum .Finally, I told her I was the one that was driving the truck that killed her brother... She then told me this:

"So it was your plan all along? To destroy my whole life to finally devastate my sanity?! WAS IT WORTH IT?!" She screamed at me with great hate.

"It was worth every moment, Natalia. I had a wonderful moment spending my time with you, but now I must depart. We will see each other again very soon, you can believe me."

Those were the last word I ever said to her, and as I walked away, I could her cry over her mistake.
So this is how the story of the Fallen Family end. I hope you liked this anecdote and that it will make you think.

Sincerely yours,
-Death


The difference between stupidity and genius is that genius has its limits.
-Albert Einstein

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