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new intro 2010-09-19 18:04:19 Reply

I made a little intro for my username that i'll be putting in front of all of my new animations or whatever, any criticisms or commentary?


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Response to new intro 2010-09-19 18:30:21 Reply

At 9/19/10 06:04 PM, bondageoctopus wrote: I made a little intro for my username that i'll be putting in front of all of my new animations or whatever, any criticisms or commentary?

Cool! But it was a little lengthy for an intro, and I couldn't read the name at the end...at all

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Response to new intro 2010-09-19 18:57:05 Reply

Cool! But it was a little lengthy for an intro, and I couldn't read the name at the end...at all

I mean it's my name but I get your point, I should probably make it readable


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Response to new intro 2010-09-24 13:35:17 Reply

At 9/19/10 06:57 PM, bondageoctopus wrote:
Cool! But it was a little lengthy for an intro, and I couldn't read the name at the end...at all
I mean it's my name but I get your point, I should probably make it readable

try putting the name on the begining, playing the same time as the animation... (not in the end)


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Response to new intro 2010-09-24 23:47:38 Reply

It looks good but it's hard to read your name on it.

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Response to new intro 2010-09-25 00:03:04 Reply

i dont think it's too long.
I couldnt read you name
and i didn't really understand why there we handcuffs at the bottom.


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Response to new intro 2010-09-25 13:31:51 Reply

At 9/25/10 12:03 AM, Spac3case916 wrote: i dont think it's too long.
I couldnt read you name
and i didn't really understand why there we handcuffs at the bottom.

bondageoctopus

and I agree, the text needs to be redone. Maybe keep the same line weight and color as everything else and animate it getting written.

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Response to new intro 2010-09-25 15:01:24 Reply

bondageoctopus

ohhhhh
yeah that wasn't very clear.


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