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small test 2010-09-15 10:05:22 Reply

this is the small test made by me...added some effects,vcam...blur...what dod u think about it...looking cool or not....here's the link...

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1284555722

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Response to small test 2010-09-15 22:26:40 Reply

It would be good if you drew the people realistically and not with a few lines and no features at all.


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Response to small test 2010-09-16 12:23:32 Reply

At 9/15/10 10:26 PM, Nayhan wrote: It would be good if you drew the people realistically and not with a few lines and no features at all.

That's called stick animation.
It's ok if you aren't interested in his style or category of animation, just try not to comment when you see it. (don't mistake me for a hardcore stickman fan)

Not bad, but it's kinda short to be even rated properly.
I don't know since when you started working with flash, so i really can't say much about it.

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Response to small test 2010-09-16 12:37:02 Reply

thats nice, but as nayhan said, stop playing with those sticks.


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Response to small test 2010-09-16 16:23:15 Reply

Sticks are crap. Besides, you don't even animate them falling to the ground, just disappearing.


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Response to small test 2010-09-17 08:22:41 Reply

At 9/16/10 04:23 PM, Animator1mike wrote: Sticks are crap. Besides, you don't even animate them falling to the ground, just disappearing.

i think if you dont like stick fights....just shut ur mouth....dont know the taste of special effects......


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Response to small test 2010-09-17 09:56:47 Reply

Some comments are best left to yourselves. If you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything.

As a previous person said it is indeed a tad short to rate.
From what I've seen you have a good sense of movement, not the greatest but still pretty good. I would rather see the stick figures land on the ground rather than disappearing but if that's what you wanna do then that's up to you.
Good use of the v-cam by the way.


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