Is it okay?

[oOwunderbraOo]

So... this is my illustration of Hansel and Gretel i did for one of my friends. I don't have a tablet so i do it with a mouse. I would like to know your opinions, and what could I do to improve myself. If you want to rate it there's a link. Thank you!
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/oowun derbraoo/drugs

[Ryajin-Geki]

Wow I like that alot. It's pretty good! They only thing I can really say about something to imrpove/ work on is the characters arms. They are hilarious, but they seem extremely small to me.

[oOwunderbraOo]

well thank you!

[Peglay]

it looks pretty cool, i love the way you drew the trees

[oOwunderbraOo]

Thanks. There's some more on my page (?(i guess it's called that way)) if you want to check it out. I did one when I saw your illustration of yourself, i guess.

[Spac3case916]

At 9/9/10 02:14 PM, oOwunderbraOo wrote: So... this is my illustration of Hansel and Gretel i did for one of my friends. I don't have a tablet so i do it with a mouse. I would like to know your opinions, and what could I do to improve myself. If you want to rate it there's a link. Thank you!
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/oowun derbraoo/drugs

yeah dude i like ti.
maybe ry some traditional stuff so we can see what you can do with a pen/pencil?

[InnerChild548]

It's pretty decent.

[Spac3case916]

anymore like these?

[oOwunderbraOo]

yeah... I uploaded some marker and colored pencil stuff.
http://oowunderbraoo.newgrounds.com/art/

[Peglay]

I love the Friends? one :D

[oOwunderbraOo]

Ok... so this is something I did for my girlfriend with a pencil... It looks a bit better on paper but everyone says that, so forget it. I don't put to much detail because i think that photos are for high detail level. Of course, tell my do you like it, hate it, and what can I do better next time. Thanks.

[xSkell]

At 9/20/10 04:04 PM, oOwunderbraOo wrote: Ok... so this is something I did for my girlfriend with a pencil... It looks a bit better on paper but everyone says that, so forget it. I don't put to much detail because i think that photos are for high detail level. Of course, tell my do you like it, hate it, and what can I do better next time. Thanks.

The thumb is a little off, it could be bend more and the bend could be put a little further down

[oOwunderbraOo]

And here's another one...