DNoack's Worthless Crap

[DNoack757]

This is my personal animation thread, somewhere for me to post the loads of crap I plan to put out in the future. I am very, very open to criticism and would like to remind you that I am just starting out so no noob bashin' iight.

Here is the swf for the gif below. I suggest you check out the swf, cause it's just better.

I'll try to post something everyday, so back to work.

[CloudEater]

That is pretty good. But why a stick guy? they may be alot easier but they look like crap and wont get you anywhere. Characters don't have to be complicated but at least give them some thickness, try and make their bodies out of simple shapes. Lines for arms and legs can be ok but don't use generic stick figures like this.

You should spend a but more time on the blast thing and try and animate it in a more structured way because it looks too much like you've just scribbled over it to make it look like it's moving.

[DNoack757]

At 9/9/10 02:22 AM, CloudEater wrote: That is pretty good. But why a stick guy? they may be alot easier but they look like crap and wont get you anywhere. Characters don't have to be complicated but at least give them some thickness, try and make their bodies out of simple shapes. Lines for arms and legs can be ok but don't use generic stick figures like this.You should spend a but more time on the blast thing and try and animate it in a more structured way because it looks too much like you've just scribbled over it to make it look like it's moving.

Well thank you Cloudy. I guess I'll just have to spend more time on the next one. The lazer thing really was crap and at that point didn't know what I was doing so... yah. I shall have something done by tonight my league, and I will spend more than an hour on it!