At 3/4/11 12:10 AM, argile wrote:
Well It looks like your style has changed a bit since over time because admittedly I was sort of grossed out by some of the crazy perspective or proportions you were trying to do for comical effect.
At 3/6/11 09:17 AM, Dalenbourg wrote:
You need stronger highlights and darker darks in this picture. it appears that there is no true ligthsource, only gammalight that floats around like what you see in bad videogames and stuff.
I gotta keep that in mind next time, I already turn in a newer version of it but it didn't ease my head knowing that I could of done more.
At 3/6/11 01:01 PM, Nicol3 wrote:
Your shading is all over the place-- and your lines are way to hairy at times. Your figures/drawings can become very very unclear.
I really do get that alot :o
You really should tackle your linework before anything else. You can shade and crosshatch as much as you want-- but if the drawing's lumpy, badly composited, etc-- there's really no point.
I'll definitely keep that part in mind.
Again-- single, SINGLE lines. Even if you're sketching. Sketch does not = scribbles.
Right! single lines! I'll definitely work on that. Btw, are you reaaaaally sure sketches does not = to scribbles?
At 3/7/11 12:02 AM, Lintire wrote:
Ahh... ahhhh... ahhhhhh...
Blurry... lines... making... violent... penetration... to... eyes.....
And really, that's about it - for now, that's really the main thing you need to do. In fact, I demand it. You see that brush you're using? Change it to something hard edged - if you're using Photoshop, they'll be along the first brushed you can even select. I've never, never, repeat, never seen a shading type done well with the blurry brush.
So try changing to that, do your next piece, and go from there. It looks harder to cover the area in detailed shading with a hard-edged brush, and it is, but it's easier then learning how to not to rape people's eyes with a soft edge.
Still had photoshop up from last pic lol
Ohhhhhh, now that makes alot more sense, btw how did you got your brush to vector out like that?
K, I've may had been really busy with school work and food poisoning but I know for sure I need to make out for all those lost times......well all I got are these.