applehead

[Kixen]

its short, but whats going to happen after it zooms in is flashbacks of his childhood..

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/0cb5 0d08fe5161c1238071273cd8e390

[Zachary]

It looks alright, but it could definitely use some improvements. One thing i noticed is that when he is ready to flashback, his hands are really messed up. The background also looks rushed, maybe add some more to it like some more detailed shading.

The tree also looks very rushed. If you fix this stuff up i'm sure it will turn out better in the end. Of course it will take more time, but in the end it will be worth it.

Good luck :P

[Kixen]

how are his hands messed up? they look fine to me..

[iceimp]

Hes gona make a lot of creepy sharp teeth faces then say, Why yes i do! why thank you.

[Kixen]

i might actually do that it sounds better then my idea ha

[Kixen]

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/bb17 5547b818bc144c896836b78513e6 updated! what should happen next? and i might take it into consideration

[Kixen]

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/54 6944 <--- its done, made 6 in the top 10 of today..