help me please

[tibistar]

i need advice for my drawing/editing and the people of newgrounds are the only ones good enough for the job

i do this because nobody has written on my account so i thought i try here

you can find the rest of my art on my account at
my account

[Luwano]

Generally the lines and the anatomy need a little refinement, but I think it's not bad so far. I like the pose you chose for him. He just looks kinda rough, so you should work out some details and give him a smaller head, it almost looks like a chibi version. If you spend more time on this, it could be a really good piece of art.

You should consider adding backgrounds to your drawings, they look kinda blank. Just thinking....

[tibistar]

thank you you are the first person ever to help me on newgrounds with my drawings so thereby i now regard you as AWESOME!

[Luwano]

At 8/25/10 04:13 AM, tibistar wrote: i now regard you as AWESOME!

Thanks, that's too kind. :P

But be aware that some of the more experienced artists can give you better and more detailed feedback. I forgot to mention that the body needs shading. You added some shading to the head and to one of your other deadpool pics, but this one is still missing some shading.

[cam155]

what i think you should do is work on the lines a little bit like make them a little thiner and clean up like the waviness. you are a very good artist alot better then me. keep up the good work. :)

[tibistar]

thankyou for your feedback

you are also now regarded as awesome

[bigjonny13]

I'm not a fan of how you went with the version that has blades sprout from his hands. Deadpool should be wielding blades, not growing them.