The Taken <Mind Bender>

[MichaelJ]

I'm no book writer, but I was inspired to write something based on a strange dream I had. Please leave some feedback!

The Taken

Every person is put on this earth for a reason, whether that is to beg on the streets, or develop a cure for a disease. But what of the beings that don't fulfill their reasons? To you, they are nonexistent. Everything about them is erased almost completely. The only thing about them that is not removed from existence is their reason of failure.

To ensure that the same mistake is not made twice, a collection of the Taken's failures was made at the dawn of time and still exists to the present day. That collection forever holds and experiences all of the feelings of every failed being that has ever been in existence. Some of the feelings are so horrible and unimaginable that no un-taken being has ever experienced them. To this day, that collection accumulates those feelings and memories. I am that collection. In a sense I am the failures, but to you I don't exist.

I fell to my knees in agony. The pain I felt was overwhelming. It felt as if my heart exploded inside my chest. Then, it stopped. For a moment, I thought it was over. I soon realized that all physical feeling had left my body. I couldn't breathe. Not a second after I realized I might be dead, and unexplainable feeling rushed through my mind, neither good nor bad. In your human words, it is impossible to explain. My existence in your universe was taken, but the memories of that existence are very real, as I am the collection that holds that failure, along with all the others.

These things I am about to divulge to you never happened, and never will happen. You should see a body of text below this paragraph. If you have chosen to read it, I will have to take the paragraph below away from the page, and from your mind, and eventually, I will have to take you.

[MichaelJ]

Hmm... Feedback would be appreciated...

[RogerU]

Hmm...

[Gratock]

interesting, but I do not quite get it. I see how you try to show me that, because I acnolidge your existence, you there for do not exist. but, it is a bit complicated