Futuristic Painting Set

[Romesh0001]

Hey guys this being my first post, I decided to upload some of my recent artwork on the art portal, hope you guys enjoy them, you can also find some larger versions below:
Painting 1
Painting 2

Thanks for your time and paitence to read this!

[Luwano]

The remind me of those blue bonus stage portals from the first Turok game. :P

But without the actual description they would just look like random blue swirls. Sorry if that sounds harsh. I went to the high res versions in the portal and then I could see the space background.

I can't much of an advice here, I would just refine both pics too make them look less splotchy. Things in nature may look random, but there is an order in this randomness - ask Fibonacci. ^^
I hope this is not too far off topic.

And you could maybe add a planet or distant star somewhere, too make clear that it's a space scene even without reading the description or watching the fullview.

[Romesh0001]

At 8/21/10 05:56 PM, Luwano wrote: The remind me of those blue bonus stage portals from the first Turok game. :P

But without the actual description they would just look like random blue swirls. Sorry if that sounds harsh. I went to the high res versions in the portal and then I could see the space background.

I can't much of an advice here, I would just refine both pics too make them look less splotchy. Things in nature may look random, but there is an order in this randomness - ask Fibonacci. ^^
I hope this is not too far off topic.

And you could maybe add a planet or distant star somewhere, too make clear that it's a space scene even without reading the description or watching the fullview.

Thanks for your feedback and prompt, yeah I see what you mean, I'll get back on the original PSD and try and smoothen out those splotches, and add some additional space features.

Once again thanks for your prompt response, I will add an update shortly!