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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-29 15:10:56 Reply

At 8/29/10 02:57 PM, argile wrote:
I'm not really sure how to go on about this without sounding like a dick myself , so it probably would have been best if it were ignored in the first place.

It's not dick-ish to tell a dick off, though it can be idiotic.
Sven, say something constructive, please.

Kashi, the cock looks pretty good, although something about the neck bothers me; I think the detail feels out of place, and the necks of roosters usually go back farther (and are much fatter) than that. See the attached image for example.

As for the grafitti, it's looking pretty good. I like the Newground one the most, and the Kashi one the least. The NG has great effects surrounding it, but the Kashi one has confusing letters and looks kind of messy and unorganized, as though you were trying for something more complex and went a bit too far.

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-29 15:26:53 Reply

At 8/29/10 03:10 PM, Luxembourg wrote: Kashi, the cock looks pretty good, although something about the neck bothers me; I think the detail feels out of place, and the necks of roosters usually go back farther (and are much fatter) than that. See the attached image for example.

As for the grafitti, it's looking pretty good. I like the Newground one the most, and the Kashi one the least. The NG has great effects surrounding it, but the Kashi one has confusing letters and looks kind of messy and unorganized, as though you were trying for something more complex and went a bit too far.

lol, cock.
yeah, the newgrounds one is also my favorite, and i assume the one you liked the least is the first Kashi one? or the "Kaske" one (xD; btw gonna fix that... later....)
once again thanks for the constructive criticism. right now im doing a school project (1st week, yay.) that involves graffiti (explains the practice) so when im done i might/might not post it.
also, ill get back to you sven when i find my give-a-shit meter :3

now where did it go...?
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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-29 15:34:27 Reply

At 8/29/10 03:26 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:

lol, cock.
yeah, the newgrounds one is also my favorite, and i assume the one you liked the least is the first Kashi one? or the "Kaske" one (xD; btw gonna fix that... later....)

Oops, sorry, I meant the most recent Kashi one; "Kaske".


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-31 19:27:07 Reply

At 8/29/10 02:14 PM, sven647 wrote: All i can think about when i look your art is that one picture of a pile of shit

Agreed, Also your art isn't so good either.

But its a hell of alot better than this.


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-31 19:31:46 Reply

At 8/31/10 07:27 PM, Whysomangry wrote:
At 8/29/10 02:14 PM, sven647 wrote: All i can think about when i look your art is that one picture of a pile of shit
Agreed, Also your art isn't so good either.

But its a hell of alot better than this.

"I don't think your art is good" isn't constructive. Really. How is she supposed to respond to that? "Oh, it's not good enough? Well then, I'll just instantly become better! Ta-da!"
You have to tell why you think so, how she can do better.


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-31 19:43:51 Reply

At 8/31/10 07:31 PM, Luxembourg wrote:
At 8/31/10 07:27 PM, Whysomangry wrote:
At 8/29/10 02:14 PM, sven647 wrote:
"I don't think your art is good" isn't constructive. Really. How is she supposed to respond to that? "Oh, it's not good enough? Well then, I'll just instantly become better! Ta-da!"
You have to tell why you think so, how she can do better.

His anatomy for his drawings is fucking weird so inother words, Draw better.


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-08-31 20:31:19 Reply

At 8/31/10 07:43 PM, Whysomangry wrote:
His anatomy for his drawings is fucking weird so inother words, Draw better.

Who is this his you speak of? Kashi is a girl. Rather odd of you to say "his" after Luxembourg referred to Kashi as a girl, especially since you quoted the very text that stated Kashi's gender.

That's still not criticism, anyway. You might as well say "This is stupid because I say it is".

As Luxembourg said, why?

The anatomy is weird. Why? Are the legs too long? The heads too narrow? Are you thrown off by how it's lined and colored? Being incredibly specific never hurt anybody.


I have nothing to say that is at all relevant.

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-06 00:39:43 Reply

WOw

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-06 16:39:10 Reply

At 9/6/10 12:39 AM, NinjaHouse wrote: WOw

COw

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-06 16:49:28 Reply

At 9/6/10 04:39 PM, Glacier wrote:
At 9/6/10 12:39 AM, NinjaHouse wrote: WOw
COw

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-06 17:06:26 Reply

At 9/6/10 04:49 PM, DemocracyFTW wrote:
At 9/6/10 04:39 PM, Glacier wrote:
At 9/6/10 12:39 AM, NinjaHouse wrote: WOw
COw
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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-06 18:26:44 Reply

BLah

wtf? im gone for what, 5 days, and this is what my thread turns into? fucking great.
however, this did make me lol, to see more arguements pop up about my so called "shitty art" from people with less than pleasing pieces themselves. if you havent got anything constructive to say, then fuck off. it only wastes space.
thanks Lux for constructive criticism, and NinjaHouse/Pinky for change of subject...?

in other news, i might be posting more shitty art soon, ive been working on and off a calendar submission.

and fixing the graffiti too, kind of.

i was seriously debating posting this, but its for the "why the fuck not?" factor

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-07 23:28:29 Reply

boredom and dA has convinced me to do half assed realism, woo!
looking back on it, this one does really suck, but next pic is better (although shitty webcam pic D:)

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-07 23:34:25 Reply

arghh! stupid webcam, so lame
ill get around to scanning it on thursday probably
till then, crappy quality gogogo! :P

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-07 23:42:08 Reply

At 9/7/10 11:28 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: boredom and dA has convinced me to do half assed realism, woo!

even worse, wrong version. still needs work though, of course

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-12 19:05:12 Reply

I went to Borders yesterday, and I got this cool drawing book by a very good artist, Giovanni Civardi (Picture Below)
So far its been very helpful with realism, and I'm hoping i can use this to, uh, better my art :P

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-12 23:20:12 Reply

scribbled the first bits of this at my grandmas house today, finished the rough sketch on the ride home, redrew most of it in SAI, and then added finishing touches (and "shading") just moments ago. the hatching wont be in the final version (i think) but i thought i might as well practice it *shrugs*
this is gonna be my battle royale character :P

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-13 23:44:33 Reply

More work. Lineart... done?

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-14 00:12:11 Reply

At 9/13/10 11:44 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: More work. Lineart... done?

looks good.
the folds in the cloth are great.
the hands look a little undone and where's his pupils?
they were present in the earlier draft.


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-15 21:18:05 Reply

At 9/14/10 12:12 AM, Spac3case916 wrote:
At 9/13/10 11:44 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: More work. Lineart... done?
looks good.
the folds in the cloth are great.
the hands look a little undone and where's his pupils?
they were present in the earlier draft.

yeah thanks, fixed it ;)
and more work. i decided hatching is fun and looks really nice, so i added that xP

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-15 21:23:37 Reply

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-15 23:49:11 Reply

Finished ;)
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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-15 23:52:51 Reply

At 9/7/10 11:42 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:
At 9/7/10 11:28 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: boredom and dA has convinced me to do half assed realism, woo!
even worse, wrong version. still needs work though, of course

You should give this guy some hair (maybe) and a body!
I like the shading cause there's no linework and it still has very definite edges.

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-30 22:59:39 Reply

At 9/15/10 11:52 PM, Spaghetti14 wrote:
At 9/7/10 11:42 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:
At 9/7/10 11:28 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: boredom and dA has convinced me to do half assed realism, woo!
even worse, wrong version. still needs work though, of course
You should give this guy some hair (maybe) and a body!

maybe, but i think ill let it rot in WIP hell :P

I like the shading cause there's no linework and it still has very definite edges.

you mean cel-shading? thanks :P

anyways, fun in iScribble!
Lineart by M-Vero (i think)

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-09-30 23:07:04 Reply

At 9/30/10 10:59 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: shit makin demo jealous

im jealous


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-10-07 18:00:22 Reply

okay, well i worked my ass off for this pic, so i thought my blood sweat and tears would be enough to post this :P
I need to work on the perspective in box 3 and the proportions in box 4...

any more critique will be appreciated!

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-10-07 18:01:55 Reply

also, sigs!
which one looks better?

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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-10-07 18:40:52 Reply

At 10/7/10 06:01 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: also, sigs!
which one looks better?

blue one looks better, but frankly I dont like both of them.


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-10-07 18:41:12 Reply

At 10/7/10 06:01 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: also, sigs!
which one looks better?

just glad neither has the link


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Response to ~Kashi's Art Thread~ 2010-10-07 20:01:57 Reply

At 10/7/10 06:41 PM, DemocracyFTW wrote:
At 10/7/10 06:01 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote: also, sigs!
which one looks better?
just glad neither has the link

well, i DID fucking tell you so :P

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