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i only liked you, now i love you

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i only liked you, now i love you 2010-07-27 06:18:08 Reply

"You know I been waiting for ever when I was going to beable to talk to you again. I knew we didn't talk and imp really sorry, I just didn't know what to say"
He looked down not sure of what to say. Inside his heart was broken. But outside he was calm as could be. Little emotion showed threw and only people who really knew him could tell what it meant.

He looked back up at her. "I only wanted to be there for you, and to get you to be happy. Even after we broke up, I was mad but I still wanted to be with you. It's just you hurt me so bad. I didn't know what to think."

He looked back down grabbing the bed. Not sure whether to feel happy she was here next to him or sad because she was. He was at a loss.

Then she hugged him.

"It's not your fault we went out cuz we liked each other, I didn't want it to change anything, but it did. Don't beat yourself up. It was the wrong thing to do. Even though you were mad at me my feelings I thought I lost had gotten stronger. I thought you didn't like me. But now I look, I don't care. I just want you to know I love you."

She held him closer to her almost in a cracking voice trying not to cry. All he could do was sitting there stunned at her words.


i like pie ^^

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Response to i only liked you, now i love you 2010-07-28 00:51:45 Reply

Please check your spelling and grammar before you post a story, if you don't show effort in your work then why should anyone show effort in critiquing/ responding to it?

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Response to i only liked you, now i love you 2010-07-31 00:43:59 Reply

why? who knows. do i care? who knows. its up here because? who knows


i like pie ^^