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Allright, need some stuff from ya'll:
first: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1

Now I need someone with a good mic to say in an announcer voice:
"Drill Kirby!"

and someone with a good mic to say in a narrator voice:
"Moments Later..."

after adding those voice, I need to get a bg song for the intro, but I can just rip that off from the anime and im all done

At 10/23/10 09:57 AM, JPB wrote: Allright, need some stuff from ya'll:
first: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1

I didn't like the transformation sequence. It was way too lazy. Also, the gore part was very unfitting and you may wanna think about removing that. Otherwise it's good.

At 10/23/10 10:08 AM, FlashfireEX wrote:

At 10/23/10 09:57 AM, JPB wrote: Allright, need some stuff from ya'll:
first: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1

Also, the gore part was very unfitting and you may wanna think about removing that. Otherwise it's good.
hey fuck you man

@flashfire: that spin was hard I tell you, I indeed agree, however:
I have no idea how to do it:
-Doing it full anime style would be too hard
-I've tried doing it some 2 different ways and it looked to weird
-fhasgfjkhfuqeegfcjkha too effin' tired
-only way I could do it would be like having a drill grow out of Kirby when hes still glowing, I'll inbetween it to the standing pose and have the glow fade off, would take some time but I should have it done by next weekend, and, as i much as I could do it, I don't wanna D:
now if you want, I'll do that, putting effort into it, but if it looks weird, I'm not gonna try even once more D:<

@flash (again):
so I had this originally:
http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/9bed 5a569c1f7bd1d8f75ceeb5866faf
all I needed was a loud bang and presto
but then fig suggested it would be better with gore and such, and he offered himself to do that for me, and so he kindly did, both are good for me, while mine leaves with a good bang, I find the expression change right there on fig's ending more comical, In the end, I feel the audience will appreciate fig's more, but thats my opinion, so anyways, choose the ending you want, but expect fig getting mad, oh wait, he already is mad :P (the other ending could always be an easter egg/outtake though)

At 10/23/10 02:28 PM, Psychofig wrote:

At 10/23/10 10:08 AM, FlashfireEX wrote:

hey fuck you man

Jfig! Would you like to provide an opinion on JPB's skit? :D

Or perhaps AniHarv's? I myself couldn't get on SwfCabin because that site has the most unresponsive server I've seen in recent years. Mates, get a real swf uploader.

I would reccommend SpamThe Web.com, but that site has turned into a poser Newgrounds which requires you to wait for the admins to view and approve your content before it gets put up. Too slow, too stupid. This used to be THE swf uploader a few years ago.

At 10/23/10 09:57 AM, JPB wrote: Allright, need some stuff from ya'll:
first: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1

I'm still digging the background and the range of character voices. +6 creativity points.

Now I need someone with a good mic to say in an announcer voice:
"Drill Kirby!"

and someone with a good mic to say in a narrator voice:
"Moments Later..."

I think it's better off being text. Maybe a quick sound bit plays simultaneously, but I always hated narrators trying to set the scene when it's supposed to be a comedic short.

As for an announcer saying "Drill Kirby". It wouldn't harm the skit, but I don't think it needs it either. What do the rest of you guys think? Would "Drill Kirby!" enhance the humor/animation/mood?

after adding those voice, I need to get a bg song for the intro, but I can just rip that off from the anime and im all done

Say, it looked awkward how Waddle Dee's face is still looking at the camera, frightened, but never looks at Kirby beside him, who is doing the threatening. This would have worked in a scenario where somebody puts a gun to somebody else's head, but that's not quite the case here. You think you can make Waddle Dee look at Kirby when he appears?

I as a viewer would say that the gore would be allot better. I mean I hope this isn't going to be some kind of a child's movie or something like that. It also removes all the hardcore-ness in Kirby by taking it away.

At 10/23/10 05:07 PM, Gustavos wrote: I'm still digging the background and the range of character voices. +6 creativity points.

:D

I think it's better off being text. Maybe a quick sound bit plays simultaneously, but I always hated narrators trying to set the scene when it's supposed to be a comedic short.

I see your point and agree now that I think about it

As for an announcer saying "Drill Kirby". It wouldn't harm the skit, but I don't think it needs it either. What do the rest of you guys think? Would "Drill Kirby!" enhance the humor/animation/mood?

I dont think it would enhance the humor, but I believe it would enhance the mood

Say, it looked awkward how Waddle Dee's face is still looking at the camera, frightened, but never looks at Kirby beside him, who is doing the threatening. This would have worked in a scenario where somebody puts a gun to somebody else's head, but that's not quite the case here. You think you can make Waddle Dee look at Kirby when he appears?

I agree, but if he kept looking at kirby, wouldnt he just go running? if hes got the nuts to do one thing, he must have for the other... So wattabout:
waddle dee slowly moves his face to the side, already scared, then quickly goes back to looking at the camera, more scared

I also kinda think it'd be better without the "moments later" thing, and instead, some kind of whoosh thing happens.

At 10/23/10 05:27 PM, JPB wrote: I agree, but if he kept looking at kirby, wouldnt he just go running? if hes got the nuts to do one thing, he must have for the other... So wattabout:
waddle dee slowly moves his face to the side, already scared, then quickly goes back to looking at the camera, more scared

I don't know. Dee is killed pretty fast. I could only imagine he has time to see Kirby and be in shock before being drilled.

At 10/24/10 12:37 AM, Gustavos wrote: I don't know. Dee is killed pretty fast. I could only imagine he has time to see Kirby and be in shock before being drilled.

allright:
1. I'll still have the moments later but with no sound
2. I'd still like a "DRILL KIRBY!"
3. I'll do that thing where the drill will come out of him while still glowing and such
4. I shall wait for flash's decisions regarding the gore
5. As for dee, I understand your idea, but I need then flash's decision as well, since keeping the gore would mean changing that part to fit your suggestion, thats why I planned on having him quickly come back too looking at the camera, I could always make it a bit longer too, and I dont think it will affect the part in the end...

so @gustavos: Do you agree with having him quickly come back, or do you think its better as you suggested, to me right now its all the same thing, but since I should have the time, I would be able to do that if ya'll prefer...

As of now, I'm working on step number two

I have to say that I like the new one a whole lot better. However, if you HAVE to have gore... at least make it realistic. I mean... if you drilled someone in the side, their arm wouldn't fall off for no reason. Make it so he gets drilled in the side or something. Otherwise, keep it like it is without the gore. :P

At 10/24/10 01:46 PM, FlashfireEX wrote: I have to say that I like the new one a whole lot better.

the explosion one? Thats actually the old one :P

However, if you HAVE to have gore... at least make it realistic. I mean... if you drilled someone in the side, their arm wouldn't fall off for no reason. Make it so he gets drilled in the side or something. Otherwise, keep it like it is without the gore. :P

Well, I think you didnt capture this part of the story, fig did that gore part,
Im pretty sure he wont like that then, neither will he want to re make that part, so this maybe this discussion right here is more between you and fig, I seriously dont know what side to partake here, while I do think the audience will appreciate more figs ending, your point about the arm falling for no reason is sure to be picked on by the stupid haters...

Latest: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1
I think I can say Im "done", besides additional criticism and changes, Ive taken every suggestion so far, and the "DRILL KIRBY!" doesnt fit anymore with the way the part is now arranged...

At 10/24/10 02:38 PM, JPB wrote: Latest: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/62c2 087cc6483899c68337fd9cbd6aa1
I think I can say Im "done", besides additional criticism and changes, Ive taken every suggestion so far, and the "DRILL KIRBY!" doesnt fit anymore with the way the part is now arranged...

It's good. I like it better (especially the transformation). Still, fix the gore if you can.

At 10/24/10 02:57 PM, FlashfireEX wrote: It's good. I like it better (especially the transformation). Still, fix the gore if you can.

Also, that was my first post in forever that I forgot to set an emoticon for.

Hehe, I stopped using post emoticons a while back, I never see what emoticon peolle choose anyways...
But seriously, did you even read my whole post regarding fig?
In any way, would you prefer then the explosion ending? All id have to do is follow gustavoss sugestion regarding dee and it should be ready monday-tuesday...

Wait, is it me or am I hearing people bitch about physic accuracies and sensibility in a collaboration about a pink invertebrate blob who can somehow suck things up and gain skills?

At 10/21/10 06:42 PM, AniHarvs wrote: heeeellllooooo pplz thanx for the feedback ^^ ;D

ill work onthat stuff

and okay ill draw the items rather than spriting ^^ ;D ittlle take longer but look better ^^ 83

and okay o3o does anyone have a laugh sound effect for the waddle dees (ill fix how they look during there laugh later)
also so you guys think the part were the waddle dees get hit by lighting is fine? good ^^

all the sound effects are in

ohand flash fire EX wants me to use a differant music than the one thats in it now o3o
so anyone got one? (link for me to download plz)

(heres just wut i have incase you didnt look at my recent verision o3o)

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1287698286

thanx all :D

Looks really good, just make the eye brows and mouthes seem like they're attached to the face more. Other from that minor detail, I think this is pretty damn good!

At 10/24/10 04:13 PM, JPB wrote: But seriously, did you even read my whole post regarding fig?

I already knew that Fig did it for you. I remember that from a while back. You DO have the ability to do it yourself though... am I wrong?

Also, UPDATE. :)

I'm just posting saying I'm still working on my segment. Took a while to get the voice actor stuff wrapped up. Shouldn't be long before I'm finished. Thanks.

(As a reminder, I'm doing sprited Ghost Kirby)

Well, of course, and I did one too, and I could do yet another one, but the point is fig will get mad for not using his (which he offered up to do, no one back then was against it, so you're against it now?) but whatever :P
So... would you prefer the explosion ending? Or would you have another sugestion for an ending (something that could be done quickly) for me?

as for your part, I really like it so far, the style is much better than the one you used on the kirby collab, lots of movement, nice expressions, looking forward to it ;)

also.... part update please? :3

PART LIST UPDATE
cuz no one wants to do it D:<

FFEX - Freeze
JPB - Drill
AniHarvs - Angel
Eastbeast - ???
Psychofig - Fighter
Simpleanimator - Fire (?)
pshychofig - cook
Torkirby - Stone
Jacco - UFO
OutcastLabs's:
Parasol
Cutter
Magic

Please correct any wrong links or missing parts...
ALSO, we should totally contact hrechkaness, did you guys seriously reject (?) a perfectly good part like that?

The better parts list:

OutcastLabs - Parasol
OutcastLabs - Cutter
OutcastLabs - Magic
FlashfireEX - Jet
Psychofig - Cook
JPB - Drill
Jacco - UFO
JBTheAnimator - Ninja
Torkirby - Stone
FlashfireEX - Freeze
Psychofig - Fighter
AniHarvs - Angel
Eastbeast - ...Spaghetti?
FlashfireEX - Fire (Yes, I will be doing fire since simpleanimator has been removed due to lack of update)

@JPB: Hrechkaness actually dropped out. Sorry...

ANYONE WHO HAS YET TO SEND ME THE .FLA OF THEIR FINISHED PART: SEND IT TO ME ASAP!

when is the dead line?

At 10/25/10 10:03 PM, scottwjsm wrote: when is the dead line?

October 30th, but I'm extending it due to the fact that... yeah we all know that we don't have enough parts. Sometime in mid-November maybe. Hopefully we'll have at least 6 minutes of animation by then.

Wait, wasn't the original Kirby Collab thread about 80 pages?

1. I love JBtheanimator's part, its sweet
2. I'm done, Which ending do you want, flash?

At 10/26/10 11:03 AM, JPB wrote: 2. I'm done, Which ending do you want, flash?

Whichever one you liked better.

alright, ill work on my part right away after i get voice acting. How should i contact to ask for voiceacting?

sorry i meant to sat "who should i contact?"