i need critiques

[ganuganu]

this is my animation.....

http://www.fileize.com/view/e057f6f5-3eb /

this is a FBF animation spent 4 weeks to make this....and the total frames used was 802 frames.....

[Magical-Arts]

Link doesn't work

[ThyGentleman]

That was awsome, I suggest you finish that animation. I love when people get action scenes down, and you got it down good. Just add some sound effects and you'll see that in my favorites and you on my subsciption list.

The link does work, try a different browser....

[ganuganu]

At 7/8/10 02:36 PM, Magical-Arts wrote: Link doesn't work

heres the link sorry for inconvinience.....

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/a6f2 52d716e767115d0eaad200dbb61c

[ganuganu]

At 7/8/10 08:53 PM, ClassicWiseguy wrote: That was awsome, I suggest you finish that animation. I love when people get action scenes down, and you got it down good. Just add some sound effects and you'll see that in my favorites and you on my subsciption list.

The link does work, try a different browser....

thanks man i will finish it soon......

[ganuganu]

hello everybody this is my new project made in 1 month but still didnt complete it.....dont say that sounds are missing because i havent completed the animation fully....i think it will take another month or two to complete the full animation....i have put lots of work into it.....hope you all like it....please comment and rate me how much points out of 5 for this....please dont say that there are no sounds because i have told the reason before.......enjoy :)

note:when the stickman with four tails is there.i have placed a button over it..named kyubi power press it to see my special effects test...totally 2000 frames fbf animation,runs at a speed of 24fps...total time 1:23 seconds.... ':D ':D

here's the link.....

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d39e 48e0c4ddfc34d19b7ee30994e16a

[Matt-Bob-343Spark]

You go the animation down. The only thing i see wrong with it is the pacing. The timing between swings/poses seems a little slow or off. Other than that, Great!

[ganuganu]

At 8/24/10 07:43 PM, Matt-Bob-343Spark wrote: You go the animation down. The only thing i see wrong with it is the pacing. The timing between swings/poses seems a little slow or off. Other than that, Great!

thanks for the comment man....can you say in which part the poses seem slow....

[TheYO064]

At 7/8/10 02:36 PM, Magical-Arts wrote: Link doesn't work

Yes it does

[Matt-Bob-343Spark]

It just seems like the flow of the differnt moves is off slightly. Its almost as if after every swing the red dude pauses for a second. you can counter act this with more dramatic v cam moments(im assuming you used one) or upping the fps.

[zedaunlimited]

The animation was very well done for a stick-figure animation, but the red characters reaction to the blue character when he showed up was... meh. He stands there, looks at him and then waits as he jumps into the air and attacks him. He didn't raise his arms, no effects lead me to believe the blue guy was moving super-fast or something so I didn't really understand what happened right there. And, as the other commentors have said, this needs sound effects and music. Great job with the animation though.

[ganuganu]

so how much will you give me out of 5..

[Matt-Bob-343Spark]

I would vote a 4 at highest(if you were to submit it), not because the animation was bad (far from it). Its that its short and theres no BG art/scenery etc.... If you decide to do a longer project im sure it will be great

[devilsgarage]

duude.. For a start I like where this is going and it looks like there is a lot of effort put into the timing and animation effects. Gets my votes. Complete the animation!

[ganuganu]

At 8/26/10 08:28 PM, thedevilsgarage wrote: duude.. For a start I like where this is going and it looks like there is a lot of effort put into the timing and animation effects. Gets my votes. Complete the animation!

iam going to make this animation for about 3 minutes...with more special effects...i think this time the anime may get a vote of 3.5 to 4.00...because iam trying very hard to get a trophie....and i think iam improving step by step in my animation skills....so i hope this time i may get a good score....

[OnionsXD]

I'd say it's really good! It seems REALLY fluid for 24 fps. Did you use the line tool to draw the stick figures though? Also if you just make it longer and add music and sound effects it'll be awesome. :D

[Spazkid]

stick men is scrub

[ganuganu]

@wenhal what the hell has happen to you....you are asking my question to others.....

[ganuganu]

@onionsXD i used line tool to draw stickman....ism mainly concentrating on special effects.... i will complete the project soon with awesome sound effects...the music used in this anim is crystal method-busy child.....

[ganuganu]

hello friends everyone thanks for voting to my animation and iam glad to see my submission got a score of 3.24....because till before my submission got only about 2.60,2.43...so this is the first to get a score like this in newgrounds...once again thanks to you all friends for voting.... :)

[ganuganu]

so in my last project i got critiques that there was less power in my punches and stickman looks stiff and also it was very slow...i think i have improved a little...in the swf file...1. made before critiques and 2.made after getting critiques....here the file.....

http://filebox.me/view/arzh79c87

[Havegum]

At 9/4/10 03:54 AM, ganuganu wrote: Which is best to use?

2nd one in my opinion. it shows more anticipation.

Other than that, try moving away from animating stickmen. They are pretty simple and easy to animate and they don't look too attractive :P

[ganuganu]

At 9/4/10 09:32 AM, Havegum wrote:

At 9/4/10 03:54 AM, ganuganu wrote: Which is best to use?

2nd one in my opinion. it shows more anticipation.

Other than that, try moving away from animating stickmen. They are pretty simple and easy to animate and they don't look too attractive :P

ya even i thought of stop making stickman...there is another project left in making stickman anim...i will complete it and move on to character anim.....thanks for the comment.....

[ganuganu]

can i use this effect for punch for my next anim....is it looking nice......here's the link.....

http://filebox.me/view/qefaeah16

[Havegum]

At 9/8/10 07:43 AM, ganuganu wrote: can i use this effect for punch for my next anim....is it looking nice......here's the link.....

http://filebox.me/view/qefaeah16

Well, first of all, to me it looks more like a sword strike rather than a punch. On top of that I don't think it's perfectly synced with the motion either. (or at least that's what it looks like since he moves his arm down after hitting)

Also, again, I'd suggest using more anticipation.

Look at this example. Notice how he doesn't get to the action before the very last frame. More anticipation would result in the punch look much more powerful than any effect.

[ganuganu]

thanks for that picture man it helped me a lot...now i understood my problem thank you very much...... :)

[ganuganu]

what about this punch...am i added some anticipation or not.....please say me...

http://filebox.me/view/bifxiir4c

[ganuganu]

this is a short test made by me...i just was to be perfect in my skills before i start with my new project....so how does it look guys......

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1284311995