At 6/26/10 01:33 PM, xTY3x wrote:
finished the hand.
Way too soft! Too much blur. It looked better when you had the harder, darker lines... that gave it more definition and distinction between the objects and materials. Right now everything seems to be the same... but, I'm confused... is that the robot's hand? (if so, the angles off) Or is it another robot coming at him?
The liquid content of the syringe looks really great, but the perspective of the vile itself is off. The curve below where the needle attaches is too rounded... and the lighting isn't consistent (or maybe that's not done?) ...and the position of the needle and the eye is awkward... nudging the hand/needle over one way or the other might help (preferably so it's over the eye... or adjust the angle if it's his own hand so it's off his face all together).
I like the color choice and lighting ...really adds a creepy vibe. Just bump up the contrast and ease up on that blur tool! ;)