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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 11:49:49 Reply

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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 11:50:42 Reply

At 6/21/10 08:52 PM, xnccb wrote:
At 6/21/10 08:51 PM, andycastaneda wrote: No, neither is your humor.
Neither is your atitude Dumbass

And neither is yours. Don't insult others about their attitudes when your attitude is worse.

Please do not reply to this comment about my attitude. I tried to say this politely, but you can't control how you say something via text.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 11:51:15 Reply

your art sucks


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 11:52:05 Reply

I am just tired of hearing some BS when they can politely say that it needs work.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 11:57:38 Reply

At 6/24/10 11:52 AM, xnccb wrote: I am just tired of hearing some BS when they can politely say that it needs work.

well its true if I were able to score I would vote 0 and destroy your scores with my massive vote power. but I cant since your shit isn't scouted (thank god)


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 12:04:28 Reply

At 6/24/10 11:52 AM, xnccb wrote: I am just tired of hearing some BS when they can politely say that it needs work.

I'd recommend you take this back to the art forum. From my experience, the art forum regulars are very helpful when it comes to critique.

The biggest problem you have just now is that it isn't art, it's just patterns and designs. Abstract art isn't just anything, it is as much an art form as other art pieces.

This is an example of good abstract art. Notice how it is actually an illustration of something (severed heads).

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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 12:16:24 Reply

At 6/24/10 12:08 PM, Ejit wrote:
At 6/24/10 12:04 PM, WaterShake wrote: This is an example of good abstract art. Notice how it is actually an illustration of something (severed heads).
I think that's a little contradictory there. I know what you're saying but abstract art by definition doesn't imply a definitive depiction.

There's certainly more to it than prettiness though

Well yeah I get what you mean. But I think in almost all cases there is at least a sense of purpose or an attempt to portray an idea.
This is more than I can I decipher from the OPs work.

My point is, you can't just make a doodle and pretend it's abstract.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 12:55:14 Reply

How about this?

Is my Abstract good?


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 12:56:26 Reply

At 6/24/10 12:55 PM, xnccb wrote: How about this?

Garbage keep that shit in the Art forum Noob.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:02:50 Reply

At 6/24/10 12:55 PM, xnccb wrote: How about this?

I was going to insult it, but I realized that I can't do any better.

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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:07:16 Reply

At 6/24/10 12:55 PM, xnccb wrote: How about this?

Considering looking up some color theory tutorials.

In any drawing that you make, you're always, always, always going to have to pay attention to color and values, especially in abstract. In this picture, you have no color scheme; you absolutely need one.


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whoa art what

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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:07:40 Reply

this noob is a abstract painting k? now stop posting in general and put it in the art forum.

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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:15:45 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:07 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Considering looking up some color theory tutorials.

In any drawing that you make, you're always, always, always going to have to pay attention to color and values, especially in abstract. In this picture, you have no color scheme; you absolutely need one.

I accidentally his the post button too soon, so I'll continue from here.

Here's some good color tutorials: [An overview of the basis] [An overview of analogous and complementary color schemes] [A fantastic one that covers everything] [An index of other ones]

You also want to consider your composition. That background pattern that you have is nice, but you never want to have the same pattern covering the entirety of your picture unless it's going to be subtle.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:23:24 Reply

At 6/24/10 12:55 PM, xnccb wrote: How about this?

Did you actually take on board anything I said? This is becoming somewhat frustrating. Why ask for advice if you pay no attention to it.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:36:21 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:15 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:07 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote: Considering looking up some color theory tutorials.

In any drawing that you make, you're always, always, always going to have to pay attention to color and values, especially in abstract. In this picture, you have no color scheme; you absolutely need one.


I used tertiary colors in it though. (Other than the black.) so it almost has a scheme.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:45:58 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:36 PM, xnccb wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:15 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:07 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
I used tertiary colors in it though. (Other than the black.) so it almost has a scheme.

Your kidding me right? Almost all of that 'abstract' piece is primary.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:50:05 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:45 PM, WaterShake wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:36 PM, xnccb wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:15 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:07 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
I used tertiary colors in it though. (Other than the black.) so it almost has a scheme.
Your kidding me right? Almost all of that 'abstract' piece is primary.

Furthermore, even if that is the case, you've just completely ignored all the advice he gave you. He made a valid point, and you try and pretend that you already understand.

What is the point of this thread if your just going to arrogantly ignore all advice given. I think i'm starting to understand why you were'nt welcome in the art forum.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:55:28 Reply

All you do is filter-rape images. Especially the one made for me, you jst filter-raped my user image.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 13:58:00 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:55 PM, SuperGerbal wrote: All you do is filter-rape images. Especially the one made for me, you jst filter-raped my user image.

Why would I acctually make one for you?You thought that I didn't make my images.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:01:08 Reply

At 6/24/10 01:58 PM, xnccb wrote:
At 6/24/10 01:55 PM, SuperGerbal wrote: All you do is filter-rape images. Especially the one made for me, you jst filter-raped my user image.
Why would I acctually make one for you?You thought that I didn't make my images.

*Sigh* I wanted it you to prove it.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:02:57 Reply


*Sigh* I wanted it you to prove it.

I know that,but you didn't realize how simple what I made was


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:04:53 Reply

At 6/24/10 02:02 PM, xnccb wrote:

*Sigh* I wanted it you to prove it.
I know that,but you didn't realize how simple what I made was

Thats my point, its simple cuz all you do is filter-rape.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:10:44 Reply

this noob can't make art for SHIT.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:11:53 Reply

At 6/22/10 05:31 PM, xnccb wrote: The only person who likes them is sekhem.He says they are the best in the art portal.And yes he is telling the truth about liking them.

damn right they're good

i don't get why everyone says xnccb sucks, but the majority of you will cream yourself over fucking video game tribute art

at least xnccb is original and expressing his true will in his art


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:29:29 Reply

damn right they're good

i don't get why everyone says xnccb sucks, but the majority of you will cream yourself over fucking video game tribute art

at least xnccb is original and expressing his true will in his art

Thanks.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:32:46 Reply

At 6/24/10 02:29 PM, xnccb wrote:
damn right they're good

i don't get why everyone says xnccb sucks, but the majority of you will cream yourself over fucking video game tribute art

at least xnccb is original and expressing his true will in his art
Thanks.

Are you ever planning on addressing any of the constructive criticism given? Or are you just gonna carry on being selective about the posts that you read, thus rendering this thread pointless.

If all you want is some pats on the back, show it to your parents and friends.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:51:48 Reply

At 6/24/10 02:11 PM, Sekhem wrote:
At 6/22/10 05:31 PM, xnccb wrote: The only person who likes them is sekhem.He says they are the best in the art portal.And yes he is telling the truth about liking them.
damn right they're good

i don't get why everyone says xnccb sucks, but the majority of you will cream yourself over fucking video game tribute art

at least xnccb is original and expressing his true will in his art

Finally!

I thought I was going to say it!

right this man is, it's better than what I can make with filters and crap like that, but I don't think it's abstract but more of patterns and blending.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:55:14 Reply

post your uselss shit in the art section.


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 14:55:22 Reply

I seem to like "Whaen Blue Meet's Red" the most..


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Response to Is my Abstract good? 2010-06-24 15:01:13 Reply

At 6/24/10 02:55 PM, Tony-DarkGrave wrote: post your uselss shit in the art section.

You think I haven't heard you yet? I already made it,Making another one would get me banned,Tony.


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