At 6/11/10 08:35 AM, Aigis wrote:
Top left is a duck that thinks he's way too cool. Top right is a Vexo or something like that. I don't know the username of the guy whose character it is, but maybe you'll recognise it. Bottom is MissAllenPoe, a user on General aka Shauna I think, as a hard-boiled 1930s Private Dick.
Okay, the concept is pretty good, abd the guy In the top right is good, but it loins thrown together and could use mire detail
Namely: on the girl, her hat and hair are waded, but nothing else... I think the face is too, but It is barely noticeable. Deepen heading so It Is more recognizeable. Also, from what I can see, theshirt doesnt have any shading at all. To mae shadows In whutes, try using a light blue or red, depending on whether It is a cold or warm picture, respectively.
And with your duck guy, there us no shading whatsoever. So if you add some feathery shadows, the picture, Imo, would improve the quality a lot :)
Hope this helps~