sexy womans (probably nsfw)

[ZuluCS]

sup, been awhile.. just posting some sketches and things

looking for crits and what-not, thanks

[ZuluCS]

sketch based on j.scott cambell's work

..and indiana jones ;)

[ZuluCS]

pretty much completed painting here, is the head too big? something looks a bit off

process (sorta)

[ZuluCS]

..and i forgot the pic...

[Kinsei]

I know it;s part of the style you got going on here but the waste is driving me nuts.
On the first one it seems to work, but on the second one it just feels too thin...

Still pretty sweet arts though. My sexy women tend to have more muscle than sex appeal o.0...

[ZuluCS]

At 6/2/10 01:39 AM, Kinsei01 wrote: I know it;s part of the style you got going on here but the waste is driving me nuts.
On the first one it seems to work, but on the second one it just feels too thin...

Still pretty sweet arts though. My sexy women tend to have more muscle than sex appeal o.0...

thin like skinny? or thin like thin lines? i am trying to exaggerate the anatomy

[Kinsei]

At 6/2/10 05:26 AM, ZuluCS wrote: thin like skinny? or thin like thin lines? i am trying to exaggerate the anatomy

skinny
on your Indianan Jones one, it looks as if her waste can't even support her top half.

[Lintire]

You're going to have to concentrate on your hourglass figures - not everyone is into anorexic, you know.
Put some junk in those trunks!

[bigjonny13]

Shit man, these are all awesome.

[JoeTheToucan]

At 6/2/10 08:11 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Shit man, these are all awesome.

This

I reckon the figure of these are fine, I do see the exaggeration, but it's in all the right places for that nice toony-but-hot feel. Pretty damn slick work r8 here.

[Aigis]

At 6/2/10 01:35 AM, ZuluCS wrote: sketch based on j.scott cambell's work

..and indiana jones ;)

Oh god she looks like she's going to break in half.

Exaggeration is one thing, but that waist is just ridiculous.

Also, the torso I think is a bit too long. She looks a little like Goro to me. Without the extra arms.

Of course every other part of the picture is amazing. So I suppose that makes up for the minor faults.

[Ashman]

the ttons, perfect, exageration worksand on these you nailed it, if nobody else had said it i wouldnt have questioned it

the painting is just immense, i envy you my friend

[ZuluCS]

thx for the comments guys, appreciate it.

the torso does seem a little thin-and too low on the body.

i was getting mixed messages, lol, i don't think everyone meant "waist" as in the waist-line area

ill post a little more work when i get back later today :P

[Aigis]

At 6/2/10 01:19 PM, ZuluCS wrote: i was getting mixed messages, lol, i don't think everyone meant "waist" as in the waist-line area

I'm fairly certain everyone means 'waist' as in 'waist'.

As in the area between the ribcage and the hips.

As in this area:

[AwesomeSaurus]

Hell yeah, great to see you back, Zulu!

Fantastic stuff as always, and I really enjoyed looking at your process work on that painting, you should do some more like that!

[ZuluCS]

At 6/2/10 01:39 PM, Aigis wrote: I'm fairly certain everyone means 'waist' as in 'waist'.

er.. i meant mixed cuz some people said it was fine.. lol doesn't matter, thx for the crit

At 6/2/10 06:32 PM, AwesomeSaurus wrote: Hell yeah, great to see you back, Zulu!

Fantastic stuff as always, and I really enjoyed looking at your process work on that painting, you should do some more like that!

great to be back..
it's crazy how much better the artists have gotten since i started lurkin' again

[Aigis]

At 6/2/10 11:22 PM, ZuluCS wrote: er.. i meant mixed cuz some people said it was fine.. lol doesn't matter, thx for the crit

I was responding to the second half of the sentence, not the first.

[mac2206]

Your drawings are great, and your style is very interesting. A few things I suggest you do to the first picture though. I guess it's just me, But I find her neck to be slightly to skinny and curvy. Also her left thigh is slightly to small. And since you mentioned earlier that you are trying to "exaggerate the anatomy" it would be a good idea to make that larger. Also you need to add more tone to her right arm in the area I circled. Other than that these are really spectacular drawings especially the 3rd one you posted with the girl on the chair. At first I thought it was a photograph. Once again awesome work.

[ZuluCS]

thanks for the comment.. it's my first time trying out this exaggerated style, still need to get the hang of it. it's tough to maintain the "sexy" when it's so cartoony, and im a terrible judge of my own drawings

anywho.. i cleaned up the indy sketch a bit, im not liking it too much.. ill probably do something else.

i do like the hat tho

[Aigis]

At 6/4/10 04:22 AM, ZuluCS wrote: thanks for the comment.. it's my first time trying out this exaggerated style, still need to get the hang of it. it's tough to maintain the "sexy" when it's so cartoony, and im a terrible judge of my own drawings

As I stated before, it would probably look better if the torso was a little shorter.

E.g.

[ZuluCS]

At 6/4/10 05:23 AM, Aigis wrote: As I stated before, it would probably look better if the torso was a little shorter.

E.g.

is it really that drastic?

here is the artist im trying to emulate: http://j-scott-campbell.deviantart.com/

what do you suppose i do different?

[Ashman]

At 6/4/10 05:23 AM, Aigis wrote:

At 6/4/10 04:22 AM, ZuluCS wrote: thanks for the comment.. it's my first time trying out this exaggerated style, still need to get the hang of it. it's tough to maintain the "sexy" when it's so cartoony, and im a terrible judge of my own drawings

As I stated before, it would probably look better if the torso was a little shorter.

E.g.

i gotta agree, aigis' modification does look better, the exaggeration is still there but it looks more realistic ad i closer th that artists style, plus now it looks more like she can support her own top half

[ZuluCS]

At 6/4/10 06:53 AM, Ashman wrote: i gotta agree, aigis' modification does look better, the exaggeration is still there but it looks more realistic ad i closer th that artists style, plus now it looks more like she can support her own top half

i wasn't rly going for realism, but it doesn't matter. it was just a 20 min sketch, lol.

anywho, did another painting, it's not 100% done but im totally bored with it.

here's a trendy process img

[llDFAll]

The paintings are great man, and as for the sketches: you know what you are talking about if you are getting into Cambell's style, especially if you are considering it as a serious profession.

His work is; soo easy on the eyes, a commercial success, & grounded in reality but not so much so that it cant take advantage of the cartoon type medium lol upper bodies need not be realistically supported lol great stuff.

[Ne7ers]

The guys already proven he can produce anatomically correct drawings in his value studies, pushing proportions always makes for a more exciting composition in my opinion.

[ZuluCS]

thanks for the support :D

i started a thing for robot day, realized about 20 minutes ago that is was july 10th, not june 10th...
so i got another month to fix it up abit more and add a background

or maybe ill do something else altogether..

[DrkNrg]

WOW. That is simply awesome. I have been doing things in the same vein for robot day and you just humbled the hell out of my ass. I know you were looking for critiques, sorry, I just love this picture. The only thing I could think of is a back ground. I would suggest sticking with the same color scheme the back drop has going. Not too much contrast. Again, LOVE the work!

[ZuluCS]

At 6/11/10 12:19 PM, DrkNrg wrote: WOW. That is simply awesome. I have been doing things in the same vein for robot day and you just humbled the hell out of my ass. I know you were looking for critiques, sorry, I just love this picture. The only thing I could think of is a back ground. I would suggest sticking with the same color scheme the back drop has going. Not too much contrast. Again, LOVE the work!

thx man, i love yours too. i was going to go with a fully robotic girl but changed it 1/2 way through.

i really like the pose and the "high-tech" feel of it, gj

[ZuluCS]

mmk i almost finished that cyborg/robot thing but i cant get it to look right -- and the colors and composition are pretty lame... and there's no hand, lol

ill do something else later i think

any crits on it anyway? anything outta place that i didn't notice?

[jossospro]

Holy Fapamoly, these are amazing