Perfection Lost

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http://seagullbeach.blogspot.com/2010/05 /perfection-lost.html

Old story I attempted to do in flash once, when I was sixteen. Since it's adolescent, I kept in the obscenities and upped any poetic value it had. Although i'm still unhappy(?) with the punctuation of it. Partly based on nightmares, but its actually sensical.