At 5/31/10 11:03 AM, MajesticBob wrote:
Booyah Bitches. Another Wip to be made fun of.
the breast are looking much better. For more reference and practice, look up porn...
I know how that sound but it's the truth. Don't bother with videos because there is too much going on to study. Still pictures qill do the trick.
Look up MetArt It's great reference for some sexy poses and naked women. Remember your looking this up for reference, not gratification.... or if you have a wife or girlfriend, or very close friends that doesn't mind you studying them then you can go that route to avoid the more scandalis activity.
And never forget there is Always PoseManiacs
Although it's great for pose and muscle reference, there is still the problem that they are 3D models and not human, so they kind of feel stiff and have a lack of motion from time to time.
So enough of me advocating a porn site masquerading as a nude model site.. On to the next step...
btw even a simple google search on boobs will give you everything you need.... trust me o.0...
One of the big glaring things I have noticed on your drawing from the beginning is the hip that juts out there.
So since were working on the hips this round I figured I had best mention it.
You gotta make the skin flow with it's self to give it a smooth feel. And when you get this smooth feel, the girl you are drawing will look more pretty.
As you see you have the line tuck in behind another. This makes it feel like she has this bulbous butt that kind of sticks out in every direction. By correcting the line like the flesh tone it will appear smooth, you can give it depth later by shading and color if and when you color this.
The next thing I want to present is this basic hip system
Most people will recognize it, even those will little artist experience. I drew this one out a little farther than I should, but it's the same basic principle. this is a good way to keep your hips structured and a little wider. Which is very good on girls since the hips are suppose to be wider than the shoulder.
This Hip frame along with some of the other frame techniques I have shown you as well as others will come in handy when you get it all put together. Over time you will take all these methods and form your own style and technique of an under skeleton that you will draw upon.
After that lets take another look at the collar bone you have started, but you should drag it out a little more to add some feminine feel to it.
ignore the bottom line of the rib cage, I did that just to illustrate where it should be on this drawing, in accordance with the rest of your ribs.
Lastly, I see where you smoothed out the shoulder just a tad but it needs to be brought in just a little more to make it just under the width of the hips.
So far so good.
as you asked me, I still trust you on the eyes, but I would like to see some eye study. Not on this but in the future on a separate piece of paper...