At 5/24/10 11:12 PM, MajesticBob wrote:
Hand drawn WIP
Just thought I'd try to contribute. It's just some advice, though, so feel free to take what is of value, and ignore what isn't.
I think what Big Johnny said makes sense. The body is a wee bit too short, but another thing to note is that the hip segment seems to missing or distorted, which might explain why the person looks a little squashed.
As for the legs, generally the thighs taper down until just below the knee. Currently the thinnest point of the thigh is above the knee, which would make the thigh look short. The missing hip segment also caused the legs to seem a bit too far apart.
All in all, not a bad effort, really. Maybe some study into bone structure or anatomy would help?
Sorry for the messy illustration, but it might help make sense of what I've written down. Cheers, and all the best!