At 5/10/10 04:57 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
Well..... it's, errr, better than everything else you've posted in the art forum in the past.....
errrrr was this done in paint?
if it was, and im positive it is, shame on you
NEVER USE PAINT >:(
bad Girly789, very bad Girly
yes i looked at the better pic, but.... there are many spots you could improve
1. the background. wayyyy too plain, and frankly, the sun is a lopsided circle... more effort could be contributed to this, like clouds and more details and smaller tree trunks
2. ummmm the hair. theres the 2 white dots on the right (our left) side of his/her head. im pretty sure this is suppposed to be glare, but usually, glare is facing the sun, which again, i must point out is lopsided :P
3. the eyes are asymetrical and so are the pupils. just make some ovals and make them even! (especially since you are using paint >:( that goes for your sun as well)
my overall opinion: i would give this a 4/10 if even. paint is bad bad bad unless you are some secret undiscovered god. put more thinking and planning into your work, and never, ever use paint.
unless, as i said above, you are a god of some sort.
if you are, then carry on.
but the again, if you are, your art would be amazing.
and hate to break it to you. it isnt.