At 8/28/11 11:27 PM, LazyAss23 wrote:
I will be storyboarding the part in my animation class and working on it next week or later this week. :D
cool stuff, will look forward to seeing it!
At 8/29/11 03:27 AM, kakalxlax wrote:
im up for any part
sure, would part 12 be ok? check the part list for details
At 9/5/11 12:47 PM, NogginmenAnimations wrote:
Yo, here's a bit of my second part I could use some feedback on.
I didn't want to overdo the lighting effect at the beginning, so if any of y'all have feedback would be 'preciated. Too much? Bit more?
wow, great so far. If you want some feedback here we go.
AS with the lighting is seems a bit random, from what i see there is no light source in the room, not even a window. If there is a light source that gives off this crazy coloured lighting what is it? Else, you can maybe just do some light strobing. As on the other parts of the animation, i like the fluidity to the animation but the art could do with some more detail, im not sure if this is something you will add later? Things like tattoos on the man, hair on his chest, cuts or bruises? And the room, if its a jail, writing on wall, like counting day marks, wee and poo etc. Its a good start and I will look forward to seeing what you come up with.