My art-Tha start:P

[Elendriel]

So, I like drawing, my notebooks are full of drawings, learning by myself to draw, hope it ends in a good result, looking for some responseXD

[Elendriel]

Sketch

[bigjonny13]

At 4/14/10 07:20 PM, Elendriel wrote: So, I like drawing, my notebooks are full of drawings, learning by myself to draw, hope it ends in a good result, looking for some responseXD

Not bad, not bad. My biggest problem would be the flames. They don't look like flames at all, they look more like blobs,

[Elendriel]

Some radnom sketch got lucky being colored badly:w

[bigjonny13]

At 4/14/10 07:22 PM, Elendriel wrote: Sketch

His head needs to be more centered, because as it stands, it's too much on HIS left. But the overall anatomy is pretty decent.

[Elendriel]

forst pic croped from this one

[Dauthus-Nahts]

At 4/14/10 07:22 PM, Elendriel wrote: Sketch

More length in the arms, please

[bigjonny13]

At 4/14/10 10:49 PM, Dauthus-Nahts wrote: More length in the arms, please

That's how far my arms come down my body.

[JorNcar]

on your sketch the arms length is pretty good... this is what you need to do though. The neck and head are too far to the right, and thus the right side shoulder is too. you need to move the neck and head over and shorten the length from the neck to the shoulder on the right side. On that not also change the shape of the shoulder on the right side. The left side has sloping shoulders that look pretty normal but on the right side there is a weird bulge.

[RaptorFarmer]

When your starting a drawing, you should look at your reference (or think hard about what you see in your mind) and find the basic shapes. Look for cubes, cylinders, and spheres. Draw only the simplest shapes, and then add details.

[Spac3case916]

At 4/14/10 07:27 PM, Elendriel wrote: forst pic croped from this one

i like the ship design alot
and the perspective of the ships are good