what do ya all think?

[JorNcar]

made this yesterday with a broken finger (I think)... I was hoping I could get some feedback

[Spac3case916]

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it's funny
good snese of humor.
decent style.
the lines are messy

and it's impressive that you continued to draw even when you were hurt.

[JorNcar]

heres another. for some reason my scanner doesnt keep it in my photos in there original size so its a little skewed i think. Oh well

[bigjonny13]

Not bad, not bad. Maybe try adding a bit of shading to your pieces.

[JorNcar]

the tribal man

[Spac3case916]

At 4/14/10 10:56 PM, JorNcar wrote: the tribal man

it's alright
it seems like the torso is very well done/defined/confindent and the rest of the picture is lacking.
his hands for example.
which makes me think that you used a reference for the torso (there is nothing wrong with that)
but try to match all apsects of the drawing to the quality of the torso.

[JorNcar]

nope no reference... just a matter of how much time i spent on eat part. The face was done first and took the most time. The torso second, and the hand on the left side maybe 10 seconds at the end of my finance class just to finish it.

thats the hand your talking bout right?

[JorNcar]

this is a girls face I made a while ago.

I have the most trouble drawing female figures and faces. I think its cause when i draw i look at myself as a reference, but that doesnt work if i'm drawing a woman