Characters for a Comic comments plz

[Scheuermann]

this is Gordon Tracy (left) he is referred to as Gordy sometimes but NEVER Don and works at the Nu Blu store in the mall this is the hero... well protagonist anyway
this is Landon Walterson (Right) Gordan's boss and cousin he is the manager at the Nu Blu at the mall and can be somewhat of a "tit bitch"

[Ashman]

these dont need there own thread, theyll be fine in your personal thread

[Spac3case916]

it's alright
a bit sloppy
the coloring is done in a way so that i am not sure if it is intentional sloppy or if it is stylized.

[Scheuermann]

Meet Reginald Fly (left) he goes by Fly and sometimes reggie he works at the Nu Blu with Gordon and is one of his better friends he thinks his boss is a "tit bitch" and is quite the hot head
Chad Michaels (right) the hockey lover and gordons roommate he's sort of timid and finds a certain cashier at Nu Blu very attractive

[Scheuermann]

the other thread was for random art ive done nothing organized to become anything :P its a whole different TOPIC

[Kinsei]

At 4/14/10 02:12 AM, Scheuermann wrote: the other thread was for random art ive done nothing organized to become anything :P its a whole different TOPIC

Listen to Ashman, he knows what he is talking about.
This art really does not deserve it's own thread. your old one would have done fine.

as for the art. the anatomy is way off, nothing is proportioned properly in the style. the colors are dismal and the line art as well with the inking are poor and sloppy.

[Aigis]

I'm sorry to say it, but they're not good, man.

The drawings are ugly and sloppy. The character design is uninteresting. They are inked and coloured poorly. They look like the sort of thing you might find at the back of a 10 year old's maths book.

And to be honest, the way you have described your characters their personalities sound boring and generic.

You'd better be damn funny if you want anybody to read this comic, with art like that.