a commercial to rely on ^^

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a commercial to rely on ^^ 2010-04-07 13:28:10 Reply

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Response to a commercial to rely on ^^ 2010-04-07 14:14:50 Reply

Your commercial, while having a great concept, is sorely lacking in quality production values.

The most glaring aspect is the sound quality. You could have used boom mike to improve the sound. If you can't afford one you should have dubbed over the dialogue later.

The camerawork was very sloppy as well. Ever hear of a tripod? The shaking irritates the hell out of people.

Some editing wouldn't have hurt too. Keeping the action filmed from angle for the entirety of he commercial makes it unlively and waters will lose attention.

Get some better software too, making a video obviously made in windows movie maker is very unprofessional.

Just because you and your friends find a video you made one afternoon you found funny doesn't mean anyone else gives a shit.

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